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About This Poem

Kite of a forever day

Breaths of air raise... emotion.) classic form 
departure is.. "a feeling through a line"
bright red; sky or blue.!
my first inkling of..
wide ranging 
possibility's
as dad 
and I 
watch
you 
fly....

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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 12/24/2012 8:12:00 PM
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    Hello Joe, one of my all time favorite poet.., Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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    Matthew Anish
    Date: 9/9/2012 2:54:00 PM
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    I like this "Shape" poem a lot. I haven't flown a kite in a long time but enjoy watching peoplefly them. This poem reminds me of line of a Moddy Blues song: "This day will last a thousand years - if you want it to" Peace &blessings Matthew Anish
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 6/25/2012 12:59:00 AM
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    Joe, I was the one who sponsored this kite flyin contest..This really was a great entry and the only entry in this Idyl form...This could also be a concrete poem, right?...I read all the comments beneath it and it seems to be fav'd one that I should have placed...Thanks for your uplifting tho't on my teenie tiny lil poetry pages...maybe someday I will become as great a writer as u! You got some vernacular, KID!
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    Nancy Jones
    Date: 6/1/2012 7:56:00 PM
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    classic form, departure is... am inhaling deep . Beauty write, thanks Joe, glad I got to ride on the tailwinds of this one, namaste :) ~N
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 5/13/2012 10:13:00 PM
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    and waiting. ......
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    Robert Ball
    Date: 5/11/2012 10:31:00 AM
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    liked the format here Joe, been in the un-healthy realm lately so I haven't been able to do work, but the health is getting better and maybe with God's help I'll return stronger than ever we'll see. Your good my English freind how are things across the pond, As they say cheerio for now Robert God bless
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 5/9/2012 2:12:00 PM
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    This is such an enjoyable poem, Joe. I am having trouble figuring out what you want in your contest. I didn't see the haiku. Oh well, I guess others do since you already have entries. Best wishes to all the contestants. Love, Crolyn
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    raskin bobbins
    Date: 5/7/2012 8:27:00 AM
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    Lovely Joe. Thank you for your kind comments on my poems. Always appreciated.
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 5/6/2012 10:29:00 AM
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    Very well penned, Joe! Ruben.
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    James Peranteau
    Date: 5/6/2012 8:19:00 AM
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    The form you chose for this write of yours dear poet, brings this poem to life ! A write which made my mind and heart this morning swell with joy and eager to share with my lil' Noah ! TY sir, and have a wonderful rest of the weekend my friend ! Much love, james
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 5/5/2012 8:31:00 PM
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    I'm still waiting, joe, I KNOW you can come up with some poems!!!
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    John Loving III
    Date: 5/4/2012 8:26:00 PM
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    every toy grows you out of childhood.
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    Keith Bickerstaffe
    Date: 5/3/2012 7:23:00 PM
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    Well constructed, Joe! Ahhh... the possibilities as the kite swoops and dives!Nice imagery. Best wishes, Keith
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    daver austin
    Date: 5/2/2012 7:32:00 AM
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    That "feeling through a line," the possibilities. I like this one mucho the second time around. It grabs at consciousness one is not even aware of. Love, daver
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 5/2/2012 12:42:00 AM
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    keep coming back to this one. It is one of my favorites of yours.
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 4/29/2012 7:27:00 PM
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    Thanks Joe for my placement keep up all this fine writing! Light & Love
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    raskin bobbins
    Date: 4/28/2012 5:29:00 AM
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    This is a quality write. Structure, wording lend to the emotion of this poem. Excellent!
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    DON JOHNSON
    Date: 4/26/2012 5:10:00 PM
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    deeper still the authors quill, builds to the flying part, range of sky from red to blue, emotion merged with art.... great poetry Joe.... did look at the lady ....
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 4/26/2012 3:17:00 PM
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    Joe, did you see the movie on Wilbur wilberforce? It was named after that Amazing Grace song. Very nice! Maybe I can't be online much this weekend. But I hope to get back here full scale after that!
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 4/26/2012 5:36:00 AM
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    Thanks for stopping by..Sara

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    I answered your soup mail..Sara
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    Broken Butterfly
    Date: 4/25/2012 9:31:00 PM
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    This is amazing Joe, I love the layout and the presentation is fab, thanks for my placement in your Contemporary Contest, that was a great contest.
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 4/25/2012 3:17:00 PM
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    Thanks for your comment, Joe. At age three I was standing on my head and spinning around. Pedaling to Telegraph Hill was a snap for me, but my sister didn't enjoy the ride. LOL I hope you post some new work soon. Love, Carolyn
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    harry horsman
    Date: 4/21/2012 4:17:00 PM
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    Like this Joe, love the form too, harry
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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 4/20/2012 6:50:00 PM
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    Hey, Thanks for the comment on my poem...My garden has lovely weeds growing....though the plants are just existing....the story of my garden dreams. ;]
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    jack horne
    Date: 4/18/2012 1:01:00 PM
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    beautiful write, jjoe
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    binibining P.iNk
    Date: 4/18/2012 12:21:00 AM
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    This one is such a refreshing read, Joe :) I really enjoyed this, and I also see it (I mean the way you formatted it) as part of a kite-- very cool :D Thank you for passing by my poem :D
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 4/16/2012 11:24:00 PM
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    joe, back to this one again, wishing I saw it in the winners' circle. Thanks for your comments always, my friend!
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    Michelle Mac Donald
    Date: 4/14/2012 7:21:00 AM
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    Hi again, Joe! As I reread this I'm thinking that could be the topic and title of a beautiful song. It feels so tender and musical.:) Wishing you and yours the best! Love Mikki
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 4/12/2012 12:11:00 PM
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    Unique and brilliant, I hope this one does well in the contest Joe! Really love it ;)
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    daver austin
    Date: 4/11/2012 9:10:00 AM
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    "A feeling through a line." Yes! The line is almost as hypnotizing as the dipping, darting kite. Love, daver
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