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Blossoms

Blossoms Upon branches Relieved from winter's frost Exclaim their joy in sweetest scents Love found. A spring In their step, hands Held together, he stops Plucks a bloom, place it in her hair, Hearts pound. Eyes locked He proposes She opens her arms, sobs And made their vows under the pink Blossoms. Cinquain suite © CarolineCécile - 03.31.12

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  1. Date: 4/2/2012 2:23:00 PM

    lively and vivacious write aroline.. so enjoyed this touch of Spring blossoms.. been in hospital but all OK now luv.. hope u are doing well .. luv..

    Delacroix Avatar Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 4/3/2012 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, dear Linda-Marie! Sorry to hear you have been in the hospital. Yet glad to hear all is ok now! Will soupmail you. Take care!
  1. Date: 4/2/2012 1:49:00 PM

    what a sweet piece, caroline

    Delacroix Avatar Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 4/3/2012 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jack!
  1. Date: 4/2/2012 1:02:00 AM

    Caroline, a great romantic write, well done, thanks for your comments and I hope you will/have entered my contest..David

    Delacroix Avatar Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 4/3/2012 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the comments and the invitations. I checked your contest. Sorry for my ignorance, but I don't know what "Palindrome mad" means.
  1. Date: 4/1/2012 10:37:00 PM

    Lovely write, Caroline! Beautiful! Ruben.

    Delacroix Avatar Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 4/3/2012 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Ruben
  1. Date: 4/1/2012 6:19:00 PM

    Great touch returning to the blossoms. Very romantic poem.

    Delacroix Avatar Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 4/3/2012 11:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I appreciate your comments, Joann! Thanks!
  1. Date: 4/1/2012 6:12:00 PM

    it blossoms with love...always.... Joseph

    Delacroix Avatar Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 4/3/2012 11:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the comments, Joseph! :)
  1. Date: 4/1/2012 5:41:00 PM

    A very sweet write thank you for sharing Caroline , Best wishes , Declan xx

    Delacroix Avatar Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 4/3/2012 11:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Declan for this sweet comments! :)