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Dear God Good Night

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Dear God Good Night


                           Dear God, please give me a little brother
                                    I want to be a big brother
                              Dear God, tell my father and mother
                        I`m going to be a kind and good big brother
                                Dear God, give me a little brother
                              He can get my three-wheeled bicycle
                                        I`ll teach him to ride
                                   Dear God, you must not forget 
                                      then I will need a new bike
                          Dear God, it must be blue with yellow stripes
                               Dear God, please think about this now
                              My best friend got a new bike yesterday
                       Dear God, this prayer comes from John, five years
                               living in the white house on the corner
                                     Amen and good night Dear God

                                                      ***





30.03.2012
A-L Andresen :)


- Thank you for my 2nd place in the contest -

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  1. Date: 9/9/2014 3:24:00 PM
    I pray that God answers yours AND his prayers... Exquisite write and I LOVE the repetition of 'Dear God'....Congratulations are DEFINITELY in order...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/9/2014 4:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Tim :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/8/2014 3:01:00 AM
    Oh, this is a heartfelt prayer! Beautiful! Congratulations, Anne!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/8/2014 3:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Hija :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/7/2014 5:04:00 PM
    There's nothing more precious than a Childs prayer. Congratulations Anne Lise

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/8/2014 3:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Brenda :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/7/2014 12:13:00 PM
    I am sure this one made God smile. congratulations Anna Lise.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/7/2014 12:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - I hope so :)) - Thanks for visiting and congrats,Joyce :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/7/2014 10:01:00 AM
    Anne Lise, Great job. You got right into the persona of a little boy with style. You built a nice case for him to get his bike. Are you a lawyer? Very nice prayer. Very nice poem. Congratulations on a fine win. Take care. Earl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/7/2014 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :))) No, I'm nurse - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Earl :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/7/2014 6:44:00 AM
    Very tender write Anne Lise! How innocent to be asking for small sweet things in prayers which I can truly relate! Congrats on huge win!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/7/2014 6:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for visiting and congrats Dr. Upma :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/7/2014 5:04:00 AM
    Nice creative write, Congrats.Anne

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/7/2014 5:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for visiting and congrats Dr.Ram :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/6/2014 11:31:00 PM
    So creative - love and prayers and congratulations, Gina

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/7/2014 4:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for my 2nd place in the contest, Regina !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/24/2013 9:44:00 AM
    This is such an endearing little poem... I wonder if this really happened? A child's mind is very open and doesn't hold back his feelings and opinions on things... very sweet writing Anne!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/24/2013 12:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Perhaps such a prayer was sent .... I've only used imagination.- Timothy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/24/2012 12:30:00 PM
    what a nice poem I like this one lots! jane xoxo

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 7/24/2012 12:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Jane, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/24/2012 8:08:00 AM
    Really very warm and touching poem Anne Lise!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 6/24/2012 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Manos, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/20/2012 11:12:00 AM
    A heart touching and innocent prayer .God has been waiting for long to hear such one among millions selfish calls .jk

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 6/20/2012 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    jk. - thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/21/2012 2:29:00 PM
    that's a lovel childs heartfelt prayer, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 4/21/2012 2:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Erich,thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:05:00 PM
    Lovely, thanks for posting. Thank for your kind remarks on my poem.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 4/15/2012 3:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Adrienne, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 10:05:00 AM
    (: awww this is sweet, funny and cute. I love it! It kinda reminds me of some of my own prayers ("Dear God, give me a big brother. I'll be the best little sister ever. I know its not possible for my parents to go back in time. But I'd love for a big brother thats all mine..." )

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 4/13/2012 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol...Jessica, thank you for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 9:11:00 AM
    Sweet prayer of a baby to become a big brother to help the younger from childhood life having colorful dream with demand to God at night. Wonderfully done with innocent feeling. loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 4/13/2012 10:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    bl, thank you for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:55:00 AM
    So innocent and Pure, wish I could remember how to pray that way,LOL. too cute!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 4/13/2012 10:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lisa, thank you for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/10/2012 9:12:00 PM
    Reading this poem really made me smile Anne Lise... I love the sound of honesty and innocence. Diana Mohammed

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 4/10/2012 11:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Diana, thank you for visit and comments my poem. -oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/9/2012 12:18:00 PM
    how nice ,I cannot stop smiling ,it is so pure and honest pray,I absolutely love it,Ivy

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 4/9/2012 2:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ivy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/9/2012 8:18:00 AM
    This is such a sweet write, Anne Lise-- I can't help but think of my nephews as I read this! :D Thank you for passing by my poems and I hope you had a wonderful Easter-- Congrats btw on all your wins :D hugs :D

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 4/9/2012 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you nikko for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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