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Dear God Good Night


                           Dear God, please give me a little brother
                                    I want to be a big brother
                              Dear God, tell my father and mother
                        I`m going to be a kind and good big brother
                                Dear God, give me a little brother
                              He can get my three-wheeled bicycle
                                        I`ll teach him to ride
                                   Dear God, you must not forget 
                                      then I will need a new bike
                          Dear God, it must be blue with yellow stripes
                               Dear God, please think about this now
                              My best friend got a new bike yesterday
                       Dear God, this prayer comes from John, five years
                               living in the white house on the corner
                                     Amen and good night Dear God

                                                      ***





30.03.2012
A-L Andresen

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  1. Date: 3/24/2013 9:44:00 AM

    This is such an endearing little poem... I wonder if this really happened? A child's mind is very open and doesn't hold back his feelings and opinions on things... very sweet writing Anne!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/24/2013 12:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Perhaps such a prayer was sent .... I've only used imagination.- Timothy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 7/24/2012 12:30:00 PM

    what a nice poem I like this one lots! jane xoxo

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 7/24/2012 12:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jane, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/24/2012 8:08:00 AM

    Really very warm and touching poem Anne Lise!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/24/2012 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Manos, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 6/20/2012 11:12:00 AM

    A heart touching and innocent prayer .God has been waiting for long to hear such one among millions selfish calls .jk

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/20/2012 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    jk. - thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/21/2012 2:29:00 PM

    that's a lovel childs heartfelt prayer, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/21/2012 2:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Erich,thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:05:00 PM

    Lovely, thanks for posting. Thank for your kind remarks on my poem.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/15/2012 3:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Adrienne, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 10:05:00 AM

    (: awww this is sweet, funny and cute. I love it! It kinda reminds me of some of my own prayers ("Dear God, give me a big brother. I'll be the best little sister ever. I know its not possible for my parents to go back in time. But I'd love for a big brother thats all mine..." )

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/13/2012 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol...Jessica, thank you for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 9:11:00 AM

    Sweet prayer of a baby to become a big brother to help the younger from childhood life having colorful dream with demand to God at night. Wonderfully done with innocent feeling. loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/13/2012 10:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    bl, thank you for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:55:00 AM

    So innocent and Pure, wish I could remember how to pray that way,LOL. too cute!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/13/2012 10:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lisa, thank you for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/10/2012 9:12:00 PM

    Reading this poem really made me smile Anne Lise... I love the sound of honesty and innocence. Diana Mohammed

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/10/2012 11:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Diana, thank you for visit and comments my poem. -oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/9/2012 12:18:00 PM

    how nice ,I cannot stop smiling ,it is so pure and honest pray,I absolutely love it,Ivy

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2012 2:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ivy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/9/2012 8:18:00 AM

    This is such a sweet write, Anne Lise-- I can't help but think of my nephews as I read this! :D Thank you for passing by my poems and I hope you had a wonderful Easter-- Congrats btw on all your wins :D hugs :D

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2012 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you nikko for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/8/2012 6:32:00 PM

    If you change that bike to a "helicopter that really flies" you will have plagerized my childhood prayer! : ) beautiful Anne Lise Thanks for sharing it

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2012 4:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Robert, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/8/2012 2:51:00 PM

    This is a sad and resonant poem. Nicely created.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/8/2012 2:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nicola, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/7/2012 1:51:00 PM

    Sweetest prayer. Keep on writing.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2012 2:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nadia, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/5/2012 5:43:00 AM

    Good write. sounds like a typical 5-year-old's prayer.- JH

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2012 2:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    J.H. thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/4/2012 3:47:00 PM

    I love this 'prayer' poem. It makes me think of my children when they were young.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2012 2:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Joann, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/3/2012 10:08:00 PM

    God Bless You. Very nice read cutie. loved it. :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2012 2:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Roman, thank you for visit and comments my poem.- oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/3/2012 12:42:00 PM

    ITS a fun, a poem that really stays close to the heart. thanx for inviting us through this short but sweat prayer

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2012 2:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ronny, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/3/2012 10:58:00 AM

    What an Innocent prayer! Very touching. Surely God must have moved. Thanks for your profound comments on my poem The Wound, Anne. you are so kind -Mohammad

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2012 2:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mohammad, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/3/2012 10:57:00 AM

    Sooo like a child's prayer... Good write!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2012 2:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Carol, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/3/2012 9:58:00 AM

    A wonderful prayer from a child wanting a brother but also a bike with the reminder to God where the house is. I quite like this poem it brought a smile as I am sipping my coffee. So cute. love phyl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2012 2:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Phyllis, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/2/2012 12:54:00 PM

    anne lise, quite precious and heartfelt offering.. i am touched by your sensitivity... wonderful!..:) huggs!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2012 2:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nette, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 4/1/2012 11:47:00 PM

    : ) I've been there! Funny... but after reading it twice: it's amusingly clever with a potent message. I really like this piece, Anne Lise!Very nice. Ruben.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2012 2:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ruben, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 3/31/2012 7:45:00 PM

    Hi Anne - This is so sensitive and sweet. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poetry. - Gail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2012 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Gail, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 3/31/2012 10:33:00 AM

    Dear Anne Lise, Priceless piece of a child's mind. love, Kathy

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2012 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Kathy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 3/31/2012 1:06:00 AM

    You must have been evesdropping on my childhood! A very sweet rememberance - Chuck

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2012 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Chuck, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 3/30/2012 10:07:00 PM

    Adorable, Anne Lise! I love the prayers of children, sweet and pure of heart. Thanks for sharing today. You have put a smile on my face. Blessings, Rhonda

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2012 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Rhonda, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 3/30/2012 8:04:00 PM

    this is adorable, Anne!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2012 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Andrea, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 3/30/2012 6:01:00 PM

    Nicely put! Aren't the words of children so pure of heart!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2012 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mark, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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