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EGGS

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EGGS

EGGS

Eggs
Six eggs
Oh so bright
Hidden from sight
Then squeals of delight
A child on Easter morn
Finds a green one in a nest
So eager now to find the rest
Parents call out   getting hot    or cold
Who’s having most fun    the young or the old?

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  1. Date: 6/15/2012 3:22:00 PM
    Hmmmmm....loved those Easter egg hunts, Daver! Some I'd hide in their rooms, cause some were quicker than the other. I'm happy they'd had a nice visit...tat tat tat tah tat, can wear you out after a while.:) Then it turns into a case of..'here's your hat, what's your hurry?".:) Still, I'm sure you'd all had a wondeful time!! Take care, keep well!! Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 7:34:00 PM
    Enjoyed this Daver - thanks for stopping by. This is a fun form -

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 12:08:00 PM
    Stopping by to say Thank You for your kind comments on my poetry Daver. It is a pleasure to read your writings. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/31/2012 8:28:00 AM
    The title begs reading, never know what I'll find but love the bright happy feeling this gives me. The tradition is a yearly event that never seems to go out of style. I enjoyed the hunt too "Dave! Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 3/31/2012 6:54:00 AM
    A perceptive question Daver. :) I guess that's why family life is so important. Being all in it together is where it's at and everyone shares whatever it is. I enjoyed how you created this etheree.Have a beautiful one Daver. May your day be filled with exquisite music. - love Bob

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 3:20:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your works....again and again. Reminds me of when my son was younger.

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 5:41:00 AM
    Where did this week go I wonder again. But hey I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Daver. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and happiness. Keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol

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    Date: 3/31/2012 11:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A very comely photo, Carol. Like a spring Godess. Love, daver
  1. Date: 3/29/2012 10:39:00 PM
    this is sweet as the dickens, my friend. Today I colored a few eggs with students!! how timely. The daughter in law to bear her baby any time now!! Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 3:30:00 PM
    a sweet poem with a wonderful ending!

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 2:51:00 PM
    This is so sweet, Daver. Great etheree. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 2:36:00 PM
    Just wanted to thank you for your comments, Daver. Dane Ann and I will be fishing off Key West and the Dry Tortugas from April 12-19. (Some of that time we'll just be walking around the city of Key West and enjoying the sundown celebration.) There's room aboard if you wish to come! Love, carolyn

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    Date: 3/29/2012 2:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey! You and Dane Ann have a ball. Thanks for the invite, but my traveling days are over. Love, daver
  1. Date: 3/29/2012 2:16:00 PM
    Sooo cute Daver, I hope they all have fun young and the old. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 2:00:00 PM
    :) I think you can rest assured the children had more fun. Parents had to hide the eggs, but I'm sure it pleased them to see their children hunt. Great write on a tradition that adds a lighter side to the celebration of Easter, Daver. Perfect form and the poem is perfectly delightful Love, Carolyn