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I'm Happy

I may seem like a fool to you , 
Not as perfect as she is, 

I have my flaws,
I have my weaknesses, 
I may come across as a bore to you, 

Yet, 
Here I stand as happy as can be,

Imperfect I shall be, 
Happy never less.


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  1. Date: 6/20/2012 9:26:00 AM

    no one is perfect here .we are human .nice concept .thank you for sharing .jk

    Muthiah Avatar Pavitra Muthiah Date: 7/3/2012 12:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for reading(:
  1. Date: 3/29/2012 2:18:00 PM

    Such a uplifting and positive spirit in this write,Pevitra:) Outstanding! Take Care Always,Arild

    Muthiah Avatar Pavitra Muthiah Date: 3/30/2012 3:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you soo much :)
  1. Date: 3/29/2012 7:31:00 AM

    Cute...I am happy and I have my weakness to....it is the life. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 6:41:00 AM

    Pavitra Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will read, comments and write alot of poem here - you do it so well. - Love from Norway and Anne-Lise

    Muthiah Avatar Pavitra Muthiah Date: 3/29/2012 6:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    awww :) thank you soo much ! I have loads to learn and well, am a little blur on the "form of poem" . you're comment means a lot to me. Thank you :)
  1. Date: 3/29/2012 5:23:00 AM

    Smile ˜ Yessss, In Spite Of All & All & Because Of All Nevertheless & All The Same * Joy To The World ˜ Keep Smiling Dear Beautiful Lady, Love Always, John!:) ˜

    Muthiah Avatar Pavitra Muthiah Date: 3/29/2012 6:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very very much :)) Smile and the world smiles with you :)