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Why He Beams

Pallid and forlorn,
my heart broke for her.
Never saw such gloom,
but somehow I knew
she shone from within...

She buried that,
feeling dry...gray-
a crumbled mask 
made out of dust.

I asked her
one cold night,
“Do you weep?”

“My tears
    fill up
        seas...”




I 
vowed to
kiss her
every night,
let her feel
she was loved...

And oh! How much
love she can give!
She's still shy, hides
from time to time,
but her smiles break free...
(One can't trap light's glow)

Her warmth makes me beam,
reveled eclipses.

Moon dust becomes blush.





03282012
for Catie's Diminished and Advancing Hexaverse Contest  :)

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  1. Date: 6/11/2012 5:29:00 AM
    This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 9:43:00 AM
    soupmail - p.s. reveled eclipses or revealed?

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 10:42:00 PM
    Hi, Sweet Nikko. Glad you won. I see this is getting congratulations so CONGRATS, my friend.

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 7:45:00 PM
    i love stories that tell of redemtion and this is a redemtion story.

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 9:30:00 AM
    congratulations on your win! love the last line :) p.s. do people, besides soup people, comment on your work on pft?

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 9:36:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Nikko! This is an amazing write. I think it should have placed much higher. Just my opinion. A fave for me. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 12:44:00 AM
    One for my favourites..So very beautiful Nikko,sweet friend-Charma

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 11:50:00 AM
    Belated congratulations, Nikko! Awesome Dim-Hex-&-Adv! : ) Beautiful! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 5:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest Nikko. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 6:10:00 PM
    Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 4:38:00 PM
    congrats sweet friend Nikko on an exciting win for this exceptional write so electrifying my friend.. awesome as always luv..

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 4:18:00 PM
    I had no idea this one was yours, Nikko! :) Congratulations on your win in my Hexaverse contest. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 8:13:00 PM
    Nikko the Sweet you are a poet of the ages this is a masterpiece. A perfect example of a form I wish to learn. Bravo hun bravo. Luv and applause n hugs to you. Michael

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 1:43:00 PM
    So many lovely thoughts enhance your lovely verse Nikko, Wish you all the best in the contest!

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 12:03:00 PM
    opening it for you my little cutie! L & L

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 12:18:00 AM
    Very lovely Hexaverse my dear Nikko. I feel like I'm reading a riddle and I'm tring to guess for the right answer! Hmmm, don't make me think Nikko! A winning piece! I have not been following any contest lately. Busy kasi. I am expecting a dear friend to come visit me in Seattle. Love Dalila

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 10:06:00 PM
    Nikko, you did Superbly with this entry. MY, and you told me you just didn't know. Well, it's awesome. What less would I expect of you!!! I posted my silly one. Wish I knew how to do outstanding free verse!!!

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 2:25:00 PM
    How sweet of your man to offer to kiss you every night so you know how much you are loved. Like the way you made "dust" from the mask. Very cool, Nikko. Wishing you success in Catie's contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 12:05:00 PM
    Hullo again. nikko, do we have to break apart our entries into 5 separate stanza per hexaverse? Catie's hexaverses are all broken apart just like the example given in the poetic forms section, here on the Soup. I originally had my entry written that way, but incorporated my own formatting. Now, I am beginning to wonder if this will be held against me? I noticed right away that you also joined together some of the stanzas that are technically supposed to be separated.

    Devonshire Avatar Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 3/29/2012 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I don't think the line breaks are required, but they do make it easier to write with the correct syllable count. You did great!
  1. Date: 3/29/2012 10:02:00 AM
    ah a sweet and tender expression filled with compassion and empathy for another Nikko luv.. wishing u much success in Catie's contest.. and also good luck with your great new challenge to all poets here... gladly obliged luv.. sweet day as sweet as u ..puppy kisses and hugs..

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