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Below is the poem entitled Angel which was written by poet Debbie Duncan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Angel

 Hello love
I seen you there 
As I was walking through 
And I really must say 
You are the form of true beauty
As I whisper my prayers to God
I whispered for someone like you 
I see Him there in your eyes
If you take that chance on me 
I would fall to my knees for you
We could truly become something
 As the angels whisper in God's ear
I can see my future in  your eyes
We could be the start of something 
To last us a life time or two 
No doubt there are many who 
Want to get next to you 
I'm also sure you can pick 
And choose whomever you want 
You are classic beauty personified 
Angels were singing as God molded you 
God colored outside the lines this time  
Some would say you are the spark 
That lights up the fires within 
For God must have sent you to bring 
The light with you for all the world to see
I hear the angels sing as I look into your eyes
I could hold you in my heart for a lifetime or two
You are a dream coming into my life just for me
A tall glass of water on a parched throat you are
Can you tell me do you feel as I do ~ can you love me too !

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  1. Date: 3/28/2014 7:15:00 PM
    HI Debbie This one wants an edit : "seen" I don't mean to be a pain just since it stopped me from enjoying the poem,,,,please feel free to tell me if I need an edit..what are we here for if not to catch each other :) unless you were trying to capture a certain voice?

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/29/2014 3:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You don't need an edit :)
    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/29/2014 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You don't need an edit , ;)
  1. Date: 1/28/2013 5:46:00 AM
    Passionate work I am reading this morning..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/30/2014 2:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara :)
    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/28/2013 9:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara ;}
  1. Date: 8/26/2012 2:26:00 AM
    This is such a sweet and romantic poem, Debbie....very nice!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 8/26/2012 2:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you nikko ;}
  1. Date: 7/24/2012 1:17:00 PM
    Reminds me of a song from the 1950's - I think it was by Johny Msestro - "The Angels Listened In" . Very sweet, romantic sentiments. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 7/24/2012 2:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading my words Matthew, I'll have to look up that song ,,,, you have a blessed day Matt ;}
  1. Date: 7/12/2012 8:03:00 AM
    What a wonderful poem. So true angels are with us every day. laurel

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 7/12/2012 2:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Laurel,,,, raised catholic,,,,, I so believe in angels,,,, you have a blessed day ;}
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 1:00:00 PM
    ... "You believed because I told you that I saw you under the tree; I tell you that you shall see greater things than this; you shall see angels descending and ascending, unto, 'The Son of Man.'" * Good Morning, my dear sweet beautiful Debbie ... As your lovely beauty may be able to tell, I myself also have a thing for precious Angels ... This is a very beautiful poem and I believe that I shall favour its splendours, and thank you, for your lovely and wonderful visit; much appreciated ... Love, tristen :)

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 3:10:00 PM
    Ps. Smile ˜ I love beautiful Angels too sooo, its beauty, became a love song's favourite *

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 3:04:00 PM
    Smile ˜ Yesss, I can, but Your endless beauty, already knows this my beautiful love * Smile, I thought I would steal to make this my own, my dear beautiful Debbie ˜ I couldn't help it, because You Are sooo beautiful ˜ My love, Forever, John!:) ˜

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 12:52:00 AM
    You communicate your message in simple words that just about anyone here can understand. Just one item needs correction: for good grammar, change your second line to "I saw you there". Everything else appears well enough.

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 7:58:00 PM
    a vision of lovliness ...the found , the one we seek:)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/28/2012 8:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    well thank you Don,, you said it,, the one we seek out ;} you have a sweet day,, thank you for reading ;}
  1. Date: 3/28/2012 4:24:00 PM
    Oh nicely done and beautifully written. So much honesty and true emotion here. Excellent. God Bless, JB

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/28/2012 4:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Judy,,,you have a blessed day ;}
  1. Date: 3/28/2012 2:22:00 AM
    Sweet and lovely written Debbie,very well written. Have a lovely day in sunshine and love. - oxox Anne-Lise