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Morning anthem

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Morning anthem

An annual muster   
Of black and yellow honey-eaters 
Chattering and tweeting 
Brought in the dawn this morning 
Against the backdrop 
Of a grey wet blanket sky lightly sun lit 
Heavy with the promise of rain

It was a wonderful atmospheric morning 
As I woke to the serenade of myriad sounds
It was like an orchestra at rehearsal time trying out 
All its musical instruments

A clanging cymbal in the distance was industrial banging cutting the air
And the ever-rushing cars on the wet highway
Sounded like the constant brushing sounds of a drummer scraping His drums
And like woodwind instruments piping was wood pigeons cooeeing
And the chirpy sounds of other birds were like flutes interjecting
And magpies chortling a Soprano song between an occasional dog bark
That sounded Like Maestro banging His baton to get the orchestra’s attention  

© Brenda V Northeast 28th March 2012

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  1. Date: 4/23/2013 12:06:00 AM
    Wonderful poem and so perfectly described I felt I was there. SuZ

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 9:52:00 PM
    Brenda, it all sounds like music,, here at my home.. it's been long since i've enjoyed the atmospheric morning.. Everyday i have ta wake up at 4:30am,, head to my restaurant.. thank you Brenda, your poem reminded me of all them mornings i miss.. well i can do without the rushing cars... ha ha.. yes, attention attention,, where do I begin, thank you for the lovely poem, I had much fun and thought reading your poem tonight*LUV~PD

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 3/27/2012 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Bless you DP- I would so love to visit your restaurant - except I live in Australia! : ) Blessings, bren