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Daddy

Into the light Daddy...
Please give me your trust.
Hold my hand tightly Daddy...
I wont let you shower with dust.

I miss you so much Daddy...
How I wish you're walking me down the aisle,
Your little girl's a Mom now Daddy..
A boy named after you, I wish you could see his first smile.

Walk this path with me Daddy...
I promise you the road is much better.
And don't worry about me Daddy...
You taught me a lot, thank you for being the best father.

I know you are safe now Daddy...
But it still hurts now that you are gone.
I still cry a lot and wishing for your hugs Daddy...
I'm sorry for all the pain, 
I will always love you, My Daddy. 



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  1. Date: 3/27/2012 2:00:00 AM

    Malish na habibi ah. :* :)

  1. Date: 3/25/2012 10:48:00 PM

    Sarah, a very sweet and sad poem,,, very moving and emotinal....take care and have yourself a good night~LUV*PD

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 9:16:00 PM

    Dear Sarah, YOUR Words are very Emotive I read below where YOUR DAD is still Alive, that is a Blessing YOUR Reply to Joyce (I call her MOM) I believe YOU can not Write the Emotion of Death of a LOVED ONE, Until YOU truely Feel This is a Great Preamble Thank - YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...HG ( Harry )

    Jabri Avatar Sarah Jabri Date: 3/25/2012 5:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry..my dad's 60 years old now and very very much healthy, thanks to God :)...
  1. Date: 3/24/2012 6:09:00 PM

    If your loss is recent you re still going through the shock and loss. If he died a long time ago, you still miss him at very special times like a new daughter. Lovely poem. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

    Jabri Avatar Sarah Jabri Date: 3/24/2012 6:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Joyce :) ... my father is still alive though, I just wrote this one out of my emotions...of how I might feel once he's gone..and still i couldnt put it all into words...
  1. Date: 3/24/2012 5:05:00 PM

    Excellent writing, I enjoyed reading your poem Sarah. Love, Carol

    Jabri Avatar Sarah Jabri Date: 3/24/2012 6:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Carol <3