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Dreams of Spring

A tiny green leaf held fast by a sleeping tree dreams of early Spring Dreams of early Spring bring mother natures first kiss warm breath on cold ground Warm breath on cold ground brings a thaw to frosen earth new life wakes from sleep New life wakes from sleep and shows on one bare brown branch a tiny green leaf
By Linda Rutherford A circle Haiku Where you take the last line of the first Haiku and make it the first line of the next one, and so on until your last Haiku...its last line is the first line of your first Haiku... Hope that makes since...LOL because of Joann Grisettis Blog, I found this to be a lot of fun. You can stay within the 5 7 5 of a regular Haiku, stay with one subject, but say so much. more.

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  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:11:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Haiku From The Heart" contest Linda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 10:18:00 PM

    Linda, , a wonderful congratulations.. with this awesome poem * good night. :-) always~ PD

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:50:00 PM

    Linda Congratulations on your win and a very interesting technique...I may have to try this :) ...Well Done,,, Big hugs--love,deb

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 5:57:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work...Sara

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 2:48:00 PM

    Very nice circle about spring. I am surprised by all the reaction to me blog, I was only tryin to express some of my thoughts on writing. Thanks for sharing with me.

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 2:41:00 PM

    Spring is a lovely time Linda, so is this poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise