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Flight Number three two k

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Flight Number three two k

I bid you farewell my friend I'll be on the next plane of no return Number three two k a ticket one way in forever gone to stay And if you ever come to miss me in want to hear my voice Just remember So many days i dialled your number So many calls never been answered You left me no other choice And if you ever come to need me Just remember So many nights i knocked on your blue door I heard soft music in the background but there was nobody home. I bid you farewell my friend I'll be on the next plane of no return Number three two k a ticket one way in forever gone to stay And tomorrow there s' a sunrise in a yesterday s' a gloom in today there is a sunset and above there s' a half moon.
Charma (fiction poem)

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  1. Date: 4/4/2012 12:47:00 AM
    Coming back here dear Charma to say thank you and I hope you are doing well :) Have a wonderful Easter celebration! Hugs to you!! :D

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 5:29:00 AM
    Just a great poem Charma, You tell such a compelling story and get the emotions working. The last four lines are so subliminal and satisfying.

  1. Date: 3/25/2012 8:48:00 PM
    32k? ...any subliminal message? a hidden meaning? : ) Im thinking... Are you sure it's a fictional poem? It sounds factual... : ) I love the ending: "in today there is a sunset/and above there s' a half moon." Wow! Beautiful, Charmaine! Ruben.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/4/2012 7:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Ru.. No subliminal meaning.. just needed a number and letter which matches 32k.. lol :)
  1. Date: 3/24/2012 10:17:00 AM
    my wife has enjoyed your writing of this poem very much Charmaine and has expressed love to you always. Ron.

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    Date: 4/4/2012 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Ron .. Thanks dear Linda
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    Date: 4/1/2012 6:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    . . . OK : )
  1. Date: 3/24/2012 2:53:00 AM
    Charma, this is just great, flows perfectly..have a great weekend..David

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 1:08:00 AM
    This sure made me wonder what happened between them-- very intriguing poem, sweetie lucky Charma :)-- thank you so much again for dropping by my blog-- it was fun having you there :D-- and "speck you late think!" Wow, I love that! :D Enjoy your day!! :) Super hugs to you!

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 11:13:00 PM
    A wonderful poem filled with strength and sadness. I enjoyed reading it tonight. God bless, Rhonda

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 8:39:00 AM
    maybe fiction, yet so true to life, excellent poem. Charmaine. harry

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 8:33:00 AM
    Smile ˜ Made Me Think Of That Song From The 60's, 'Leaving On A Jet Plane' ˜ My Sweeet Beautiful Charma Charmaine ˜ Tis Somewhat Opposite Of The Thoughts Which I Was Reflecting Upon Late Last Evening In Regards Unto PoetrySoup ˜ Remembering A Few Years Ago Around The Time When I First Met Your Beautiful Self Here ˜ How Everything Was Much Different Back Then; Pleasant, New & Fun ˜ Pondering If Ever That Day Could Be Again? ˜ 'Just A Note' ˜ My Love to You, Always, John!:) ˜

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    Date: 4/1/2012 6:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ...."Don't Know When I'll Be Back Again?" *
    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/23/2012 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Tnks for stopping by,I remember d first times of poetry soup.You left a comment stating you live in california like my relatives,and that they live in yr back garden :).Changes always happen everywhere,but somehow i still feel we're a family on P.S ,i have never found a site quite like it.I do wish U would write again,you have a great ability and talent in writing which is so very beautiful.Have a lovely day.. and thanks 4 supporting my poetry.I know that song too.. its very nice ..
  1. Date: 3/23/2012 8:20:00 AM
    I am enjoying reading up on all the poetry I can today. I am happy yours was one that I was able to read today. The weekend is here and I must also make time for my family life. I will be back on Monday as usual and I wish you a beautiful weekend filled with renewed inspiration Charmaine. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 7:45:00 AM
    Truthfully a beautiful piece you have here. I don't even know what to say. It's definitely one of my favorite poem right now.

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 7:30:00 AM
    a great poem by you with a tinge of sadness.Enjoyed the read Charma.

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 7:24:00 AM
    Awesome charma.. love it xxx Hugs

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 6:59:00 AM
    Well written reads realistic, love and light vie