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NEVER TO RETURN

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NEVER TO RETURN



in huff of gray clouds

a ravaged kite disappears

losing speed mid-air


a string tumbles down from sky…

my lover never returns


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Susan Burch's Tanka Contest
21 mar 12



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  1. Date: 5/24/2012 11:27:00 AM

    Just awesome...everything fits and it's lovely!

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 1:52:00 PM

    Well done, Nette. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 9:18:00 AM

    awesome tanka! love it! congrats on your win! fav :)

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 10:16:00 PM

    Nette , Congratulations with your beautiful win, in B E Susan's contest.. Have yourself a good night. :-) , luv~PD

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 3:40:00 PM

    You had me going there...kite lover! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 2:40:00 PM

    Symbolism extraordinaire, Nette! You wrote this so well! Congrats and a standing ovation....Miss reading your work...Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 2:03:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in this contest. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 10:04:00 AM

    congrats Nette luv on a brilliant first place win for this lovely entry luv.. therapy today ..oh.. sweets..

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 9:27:00 AM

    lol...Congratulations nette!!!! on your well deserved win!!big huggsss,love deb

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 9:11:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 8:53:00 AM

    Congratulations on your first place.

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 8:36:00 PM

    nice'

  1. Date: 3/26/2012 8:34:00 PM

    very aptly describe. good luck on the contest nette

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 2:07:00 PM

    Very creative and expressive work..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in Susan's contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 7:45:00 PM

    Awwwweeee !! So sad !!!

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 5:00:00 PM

    "Gone with the wind"! : ) Good luck in the Contest, Nette! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 10:30:00 PM

    A meaningful poem.. So much said here sweet lady-Charma

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 7:41:00 PM

    Lovely tanka full of images leading to emotions, hugs, vie

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 6:27:00 PM

    what a gem from u ,nette,..thnx for sharing this wonderful piece of real poetry, hugs, jag

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 6:17:00 PM

    awesome job on this gem cory

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 12:39:00 PM

    Wow what a powerful write. You wouldn't think it's so powerful when you first start to read this poem, but it grows and grows, then this culminating line is hurled, "my lover never returns" I just love it Nette! I love everything about your wonderful piece! I really enjoyed your write that I have read this afternoon! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 12:34:00 PM

    Oh Nette, so much meaning in the poem. I love it. Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 12:13:00 PM

    Yes.....HERE I AM ....nette....sweet hallo back... :) :) :) sad, that "your lover never will returns"... but well done, my friend! :) - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 11:58:00 AM

    Great imagery, Nette, and terribly sad. A sure winner if this is for the tanka contest. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 11:57:00 AM

    This is so sad Nette.The kite lost in the cloud ,never to return....a wonderful use of netaphores to describe a lost love.Best wishes for the contest.

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 11:36:00 AM

    Smile ~ ~~~ ~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~ Always & Forever, John!:) *