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Needle in the Hay

I am a needle in the hay
Can anyone find me?
They get so close then move away.

I want to matter, to make a difference
But I am simply one among many.
I want to stand out and be heard

But I'm just a lonesome
Needle in the Hay

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  1. Date: 6/3/2012 7:36:00 PM

    JACQUE, Congratulations with your awesome “Needle in the hay” entry. Have a nice one... always~ PD

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 1:47:00 PM

    Jacque congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 1:20:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the "Needles in the Hay" contest Jacque. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 12:33:00 PM

    nice take on this topic. i enjoyed it! (p.s. i heard you!)

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 3:55:00 AM

    Very nice.Enjoyed the read.Best wishes.