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Babe

                  Babe
                partner
             sweet lover
            my  chocolate
      my ice cream and cake
            my strawberry
               my honey
                hot pie
                  wife




By: Leila Mijares


For: Joann Grisetti's
"Ninette Free Poetry Contest"

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  1. Date: 3/23/2012 10:58:00 PM

    What a truly wonderful write, so fresh with meticulous metaphors beautifully oven. Love this.

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 1:31:00 AM

    How sweet, I love the metaphors and the format. Nice poem.

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 12:05:00 AM

    A great ninette. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comments. Lvoe, Joyce