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A talk with Him

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A talk with Him

Outside, a table awaits idle: I join as though it was my companion
Pondering about life as if it were water appeasable to the deepest canyon
Trees and scattered leaves waving alongside the lake facing the north; sighing
Opportunity after opportunity, oh how Ungrateful I am as I whisper to him crying

" A work in progress I am Lord, assist as I sprinkle the ground below with my tears
  Lead me and guide me for I shall follow you through out my years
  Let your word be used as a sword to fight against my enemy peers
  Unseal your lips Father for your words of wisdom are therapeutic to my ears"

A canvas set aside of unfading colors; a mirror painting of the Lord above
My knees gently caress the pavement thanking him for his everlasting love
Caterpillars gather around to celebrate and form to butterflies within my chest
Thanking the Lord once again, for I know with Faith he will conquer the rest

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  1. Date: 8/11/2013 6:34:00 AM

    Talking to Him, sometimes brings me the peace and reassurance no one else can. Love this one Pace.. btw you got soupmail. :) beautiful piece this is, especially love the butterflies :) hugs me

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 6:59:00 PM

    Very peaceful.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 8:13:00 PM

    Very touching...Truly touched my inner soul....

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 5:52:00 AM

    Congratulations on your outstanding featured poem this week Pace. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 7:41:00 AM

    Congrats on the weekly feature!

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 10:46:00 PM

    Thanking Him for His everlasting love...have mercy...deep words and great writing! FAV'D!!

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    Date: 7/30/2012 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes maam...thank you Doreen!!! :)
  1. Date: 7/1/2012 8:05:00 AM

    It must be nice to feel the comfort of he who lights the canvas... enjoyed..pd

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    Date: 7/30/2012 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes indeed..thank you PD!!
  1. Date: 6/5/2012 6:28:00 AM

    beautiful keepw riitng dear God bless you love diane

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    Date: 6/5/2012 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my dear sweet Diane!!
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 9:27:00 PM

    X-celent write here G Pace! I'm so glad I started with this one! Keep it flowing~~~

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    Date: 4/26/2012 2:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol..thank you sir!!
  1. Date: 4/23/2012 5:45:00 AM

    Thanks for looking at my posts. Just started to share. Thanks for kind words. However I took a look at yours. A Talk With Him.... NICE......pjwilliams

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    Date: 4/26/2012 2:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No problem!! Thank you for sharing!!
  1. Date: 4/15/2012 5:17:00 PM

    Oh yes, continue to have faith in him all things are possible. I love the last verse. The analogy Caterpillars and Butterflies it's like you had little faith but then came a spiritual break through.

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    Date: 4/18/2012 5:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh yes maam!! Thank you!!
  1. Date: 4/8/2012 2:14:00 PM

    Man.....this is superb writing....humbled, through the knee's gently caressing the pavement....Faith HE WILL CONQUER...My piece of the day hands down! oh oh, I smell a writer....

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    Date: 4/18/2012 4:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the encouraging words!!
  1. Date: 3/24/2012 1:35:00 PM

    Encouraging words, Thanks. I reeally enjoy reading your thoughts of inspiration.

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    Date: 4/18/2012 4:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're welcome!! Thanks!!
  1. Date: 3/20/2012 12:52:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading thanks for sharing, I thank the Lord Jesus no weapon formed against you shall prosper. I am glad He protects us from and destroys there carnal weapons.

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    Date: 4/18/2012 4:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No thank you!!