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Purple Haze

Something fresh to get by...
old fades into the night,
the ticking of the clock,
the passing of a phase.
Same wine bitter -
new label requested,
old pills gone - stronger needed.
More, more, more -
new, newer, newest.....
Goodbye old.



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  1. Date: 3/20/2012 8:18:00 PM

    this is very interesting!! And DEEP (like purple!!) Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 1:36:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your winning work from Brian's contest..Congrats...Sara

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 6:23:00 PM

    Are you hooked George? Great poem that builds in intensity then the last line winds it up so well.

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 3:39:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, George! I enjoyed reading. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 12:41:00 PM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "Ten For" contest George. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 3:09:00 AM

    George...unusual theme and phenom writing!! Great expresssions penned in this winning write! Always a pleasure to get a peak at more of your work. :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 2:55:00 AM

    CONGRATULATIONS, George!!! On your big win in Brian's Contest!! Well Done! Big Hugggss~Deb~

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 3:12:00 PM

    Aul, yes new new.. Lovely await....happy st. Paddy day ~ always*PD