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On the other side

On the other side I fly above you,
I can feel your smell 
when you lie to the world.

And you go away just like a wind
and you smile like you have never met me.

So, can you feel that I fly above you,
I do not think so.
You do not care about me 
even I exist on the other side.

On the other side 
I finally see who you are,
I finally see your wishes
which I have never been able to realize.

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  1. Date: 3/22/2012 9:13:00 AM

    I like this Zeljko, a little advice, this is a free verse poem. if you do not know, just revert to free verse. harry

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 9:38:00 AM

    i like this poem. you describe the way you feel very clearly and poetically. nice one!

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 9:00:00 AM

    Z.S., Good morning, it's hard for me to see whats on the other side,, where I'm from,, i like your poem,, the feeling is deep,,,"HAPPY ST PATRICK DAY TO YOU , GOD BLESS~ ALWAYS PD ;-)