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Moonlight Madness

MOONLIGHT MADNESS

The moon follows  like a secret above them frisky clouds.
Day and night the stars come  in crowds.
Like a shiny diamond, I can't stop staring. 
Lost in that moment that has no time sharing.

Holding on to the tree limbs like a puppeteer. 
I can hear the words the moon whispers into my ear.

TONIGHT! 
I will illuminate into a world only I know of.
My very own little secret sparkling island getaway. 
A world where beauty hides the beast.
I'll be the only exile under a sunless night feast. 

TONIGHT! 
I'm gonna give all my secrets away, as I wear my dreaming moonlit gear.
Comfort upon this mundane wonder, astronomical sphere. 

TONIGHT!
I will look one last time at the mooned night,
I will close my eyes, and find myself in a box kite flight.

TONIGHT! 
I will lay myself down to sleep, 
Not allowing my imagination to runs off with wild sheep.
Like a Nightingale, I rather sit and serenade myself to sleep.
With the refreshing thought, the moon is like the pillow I keep

In this mad, mad world!
The moon seems to be the only object that holds it's sanity. 
Arousing me with it's inner peace and spirituality.  

by;PD
for contest~

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  1. Date: 4/3/2014 6:29:00 PM

    Hi Linda, let's see how far I get with the comments this time before I have to stop. Moonlight Madness, Indeed, this Is Linda, takes the cool velvet dark night and the silver glow of the moon, weaves It together and starts to paint the canvas with her visions. Indeed this canvas you paint with visions of delight. Let the gentleness of the night and the glow of the moon fill the canvas then paint In your visionary foreground. Excellent. Have a good day. Catch you later. Love always....MIKE. XXX.

  1. Date: 3/17/2014 12:18:00 AM

    Good morning fr. my side of the world my dearest sis & BFF! Loveliest hug! Stopping by to enjoy once again this splendid & highly creative write of yours-a perfect poem & a very lovely song about the moon. Embracing it again. TYSM for it everything. Sorry last night if I didn't stay long @ soup in as much as I wanted to 'cuz my internet speed- so slow. I'm off @ school today so I'll try to have more time here. Sending u big hugs, smiles & kisses to u & ur love ones! lovem4evr,Leo

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 5:18:00 AM

    There's a "Golden Girls" episode where Blanche has a "Moonlight Madness" party so that's the first place my mind went, then you sent me on a wonderful poetic journey. Another great poem from you :)

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 8:39:00 PM

    Beautifully written, Linda, and I loved each moment of your journey with you and our moon. Outstanding job.

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 4:15:00 PM

    I loved this magical, mystical poem! .... I love to gaze at that luminescent moon whenever I get the chance!....A fine piece of poetry, Linda!....I have a poem titled "Mystic Moon", that I am posting now....Thanks for reading and commenting so amazingly on my poem, "My Despair". I have to admit I love to write those dark, gothic style poems!

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 3:20:00 PM

    SoupMail 6969 lol

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 1:41:00 PM

    I LOVE this one!!! You are so creative. The first four lines sucked me right in, but the last three lines are golden. Really awesome write!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 6:18:00 PM

    nice write.

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 10:32:00 AM

    Thank you so much again my beloved friend and sis! Good night here and have a great day to you there! I'm heading now on bed and leaving you my sweetest smiles, kisses and loving embrace! Please give my regards to your family! Before I finally go, I want to tell you also that I'm embracing another great and very impressive write of yours about the moon- great masterpiece. Thank you sooo much for sharing your gems, superb talents, friendship, kindness, inspirations and everything! love4ever, Leo

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 12:22:00 PM

    This is great writing!!!!

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 3:51:00 PM

    Original. Great write.

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 7:03:00 AM

    The sun is jealous of the moon because of you! Tonight I will wait for your moon! Beautiful poem. Ali

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 8:36:00 PM

    It pulled me in. I imagined the night staring at the moon,wondering. Great read

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 5:21:00 AM

    I scanned through your poems looking for a rhyming poem. Those are what I enjoy the most. I found this poem and love it. I especially loved the line "Not allowing my imagination to run off with wild sheep." i.e. another way of saying not counting sheep. Very clever wording. The whole poem was very well done and witty. When animals are involved I'm really tickled. Great work.

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 2:12:00 PM

    surely a different take on the ole man in the moon! Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 12:01:00 PM

    nice write I like alot of your poetry thanks for cvoments on mine I send a poem to your contsets called visualisation but for got to put my name etc ast bottom dont know how to soup box you please let me know x david scott even though joined in march still new to it all thanks mate

  1. Date: 7/8/2012 9:19:00 PM

    This makes me want to go hang out with the moon a while! Uplifting...the moon as my pillow...hmmmm...nice imagination, PD! gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 10:32:00 PM

    The moon'll do that to ya! This is a wild ride PD... fantastic language and imagery. Well done!! Keith :)

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 8:31:00 PM

    a style you own does flicker here, your popularity i envy dear:) keep going p d writing some, let words untwirl, cos we need fun....

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 4:07:00 AM

    PD, every poem is eternal. This one is universal eternity...The line...'A world where beauty hides the beast' has done it for me. Thank you. Love, Nsamu

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 8:13:00 PM

    Very nice piece of poetry here, thank you for all your nice comments on my work, keep up the good work :)

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 12:10:00 PM

    rarely do i see you rhyming,PD...glad i picked this one to read today.. and how devastatingly lovely!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 5:16:00 AM

    7Up!!! this was posted on my birthday and my favorite kind of poem a rhyme this was a treat thanks

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 2:41:00 AM

    Glad you enjoyed my poem, PD. This is a great write. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Congrats on your win! Love, Maureen

  1. Date: 5/24/2012 6:41:00 PM

    This makes me wish I was good at poetry too :0

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 10:24:00 AM

    Sorry that things continue not well for your mother. So many sad things in life. A fellow teacher at my school left word on Facebook today that her 41 year old daughter had died. Another teacher lost her 25 year old daughter a few months ago. So much sadness!

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 7:40:00 AM

    congrats on your 1st place win with this! See, she likes you :) When I 1st read it, I thought it was for tracie's contest - didn't she have a moon picture up for inspiration? I like the line "the moon is like the pillow i keep" :)

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 12:17:00 PM

    Hi Pd glad i dropped by loved htis will be back again for sure

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 2:35:00 PM

    This is beautiful. Your poems are so well spoken, as though you are talking as yourself without censor. This is why I enjoy your work. The line 'find myself in a box kite flight' is especially evocative. Well done. Love, Deb

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 9:45:00 PM

    Irma, I really wish I could find the first part of the poem. I am going to look some more! It is somehow incomplete and lacks emotional impact without it. If I don't find it, I will post what I have late tonight. thanks, Andrea

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