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                                           Roses are red
                                           Violets are blue
                                           Having three girlfriends
                                           my cards are overdue






Fictional! : )

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  1. Date: 3/18/2012 8:22:00 PM

    Ha ha ha ha ha ha ..u need to hire a secretary with this much action, Jackson!! (fictional or not, it's hysterical!) :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 2:05:00 AM

    Sweet and well done Ruben! - good luck to you in contest! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 4:18:00 PM

    Made me laugh....this is an awesome!

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 10:16:00 AM

    Ow gee... One is a headache..three are a 24 hour migraine :) Ow gee ..i see empty pockets on the other side of the moon..Thanks for making me smile ..Don Juan.. :)to mine favourites-Charma

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 8:51:00 PM

    Cool, finally someone gave me props for the first one!!! (I had my friends vote on them and winnie the pooh and JOE"s were their faves!!)

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 8:38:00 PM

    You lucky man, your keeping Hallmark busy are you? lol, thank you for your kind comments Ruben much appreciated. hugs,vie

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 12:13:00 PM

    LOL i didn't see it coming. If they read your work, you might not see them coming! THIS IS GOOD. IF U DON'T MIND I'LL LIKE TO READ SOME OF YOUR WORK!

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 9:00:00 AM

    Oh, you naughty boy! And lovin' doesn't come cheap these days!!!

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 7:24:00 AM

    Good morning ;-) ruben you sly dog you , thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good one*always~pd"

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 5:16:00 AM

    Haha! I'm glad it's fictional (You won't have to pay). I think this is a very good one, good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 12:43:00 AM

    Fine and wonderful piece,Ruben.good luck in the contest..

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 11:41:00 PM

    GOOD one, Ruben. I had originally thought of using that word Overdue too. I was gonna put: your library books/ are long overdue! but then my hubbie gave me the sugar is lumpy line, so that is actually HIS line I used for my entry. haha. LUv, Andrea