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Joe Maverick Date: 7/2/2012 2:59:00 PM Quite a saga in this one Nathan thank you for looking up my page; the poem you commented was written by Michelle, I think it lights up my page, I thank you on her behalf yours Joe..)
Owen Yeates Date: 5/23/2012 2:36:00 PM Hi Nathan this is like a two person write but i loved it for that great words indeed, all the best Owen
Sara Kendrick Date: 5/22/2012 12:35:00 PM Long one..It is like there are two voices here and I am confused...Is this one co-written with someone..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the time spent reading my work..Sara
DON JOHNSON Date: 5/11/2012 5:03:00 PM you paint quite a picture ...very intense ... love it mate...
Samia Ali Arroyo Date: 5/11/2012 12:29:00 PM What an interesting story Nathan! I like it very much ...Samia
Gary Michaels Date: 5/3/2012 11:26:00 AM A great read Nate, love the form and deep message you deliver.
FABIYAS M V Date: 4/4/2012 8:07:00 AM Well crafted poem,Nathan.Thank you for including me among your winners.Lovingly,FAB
EYE of THE storm Date: 4/3/2012 9:03:00 AM nice work nate
EYE of THE storm Date: 4/3/2012 9:01:00 AM ol' nathan, what r u doing? no hard feelings old nate;
Jessica K Date: 4/3/2012 8:35:00 AM Wow...simply stunning poem! Loved reading it this morning :)
Joe Maverick Date: 3/15/2012 2:05:00 PM Such a lot here Nathan,, will have to come back again..
Natalie The Rogue Rhymer Date: 3/15/2012 10:49:00 AM Definitely wild one Nathan. Very creative.
elizabeth wesley Date: 3/15/2012 6:41:00 AM What a wild story Nathan, gripping right to the end! Wonderful descriptions and so many special lines. Thanks for your sweet visit! :)
M. Hussain Effendi Date: 3/15/2012 12:53:00 AM A real gripping story, ND, with many morals. SIMPLY REMARKABLE!!!! Thank you for visiting my work too.
M.I.A . Date: 3/14/2012 7:53:00 PM I will make the world beautiful in such a way... love this line. I enjoy tremendously this 'wicked strangely hypnotic poetry; dreams of the living. Great piece, Nathan and thanks for stopping by
Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/14/2012 8:41:00 AM i love the opening in your poem... paint my dreams... yes you will... hurt... no.. im half mean ..all insane.. this poem is nicely created....add more star dust....my only suitor...love pd
Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/14/2012 8:11:00 AM Nathan, my love... i adore you..with or without a tongue... one can only sustain the madness for long... beating stars..beating love...only leads to one thing.."off with his tongue!".. lol..sing me a song... with your hands..(sign language) inspiration hit long ago... im yours till the end of YOUR time.. xoxoxoxo..pd
Black Eyed Susan Date: 3/14/2012 6:46:00 AM I like the alternating pov's. Really cool to be inside both of their heads! I like the cutting out the tongue - wicked sick :P
Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/14/2012 12:24:00 AM boy, this was kinda creepy, Nathan. but then again, that is how most fairy tales used to be. When you think of it. Most of them talk about people getting killed or locked up in dungeons and spells cast on them. Did you do this as a collaboration? It seems like two different people are going back and forth with it. a most fitting title for this entertaining story!!
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 3/13/2012 1:19:00 PM am carried away on a magical cloud to fantasy land Nate .. sh must be pretty special lady luv...oh I think I know her too.. oh.. one of the best poems read today..
Phyllis Babcock Date: 3/13/2012 12:48:00 PM wow this is beautiful, fanciful and magical and reads like a fairytale. Awesome write with lots of creaativity. love phyl

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