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Tin Roof Cradles

Adrift on orange moons
and all-night garbage lullabies,
a mangrove cuckoo croons
her dock-blue reggae,
small mockery
of a streetwise cockerel
crowing his free-range love
in midnight lanes.

Sweet pandemonium is the
wrong side of sundown;
no island for quiet men,
this, a silence drowned
by alley wars,
the feline mimicry of
babes that cry 'murder'
by moonlight,
gypsy birds in foul streets,
strutting shameless
with moon-hatch chicks
under cool, indifferent stars.

Palm-shook rock stars
exact a toll on dreamers,
restless under clammy sheets
as far above, the giants
loose their tenuous hold,
wind-whipped crash and roll
of coconuts - freed
to shatter night - to
rock these tin-roof cradles
in the dark.

 


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  1. Date: 3/19/2012 8:13:00 AM

    A very different picture of the keys than I got when visiting. I guess that is true most places. Good poem, I enjoyed it.

    Keiser Avatar Susan Keiser Date: 3/19/2012 8:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Joann! (This was a particularly dramatic evening!)
  1. Date: 3/11/2012 2:16:00 PM

    Amazingly composed Susan I really felt it!

    Keiser Avatar Susan Keiser Date: 3/11/2012 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Kyle, thank you! The best feedback from one poet to another, I think! I so appreciate your reading!
  1. Date: 3/11/2012 6:20:00 AM

    Wow, what an atmospheric piece. I really felt I could be there, Susan

    Keiser Avatar Susan Keiser Date: 3/11/2012 8:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Jack! We are so often sleepless in the Keys! Thanks so much for reading!