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haiku 1

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haiku 1

bent Picasso face
reflects fragments of light--
defective mirror?

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  1. Date: 4/15/2013 2:26:00 PM
    Thanks! Its comments like yours that will inspire me to finish the book. Makes me feel good that you enjoy the writing. Honestly, sometimes I hate the book...it seems to have a mind of its own, and I'm unsure of my ability to make anything worth reading. But, more than anything, I just want to know I did it. Thanks again, Heather. If and when, I finish, I'll send you a copy.

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 1:28:00 PM
    Ha...maybe so. Seriously cool, Heather. Its haikuku-krazy!Well, I'll be gone til' monday. I'm off to the Ozark Mountains to hunt turkey all weekend...Gobble! Gobble!

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 6:47:00 PM
    Heather, I was just noticing, all the top wins were "dark" poems. I am glad I went with a dark theme . I had no idea what she would like best!!

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 10:29:00 AM
    So jam-packed for such few words. It takes way longer to ponder and visualise these than it does to read them.

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:09:00 PM
    Or perhaps just a different eye? Your haiku are fun to read. You should write them more often. J

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 9:08:00 PM
    Really like this poem and the comparison between Picasso and the defective mirror.

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:01:00 PM
    heather, I am going offline now and couldn't find a new poem of yours to see. I do believe I have seen nearly all your poems now! But maybe a few to go. there is a contest on questionku right now. This is kind of in that category but he wants them: 4/5/6.YOu should try one. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 9:15:00 PM
    I like this one!

    Ober Avatar Heather Ober
    Date: 5/5/2012 6:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks! :)
  1. Date: 3/21/2012 10:01:00 PM
    Awesome Haiku! I have a poem called Fragments too, but it's totally different. This was a fine verse - quite enjoyed it. Always, Laura

    Ober Avatar Heather Ober
    Date: 5/5/2012 6:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Laura :)
  1. Date: 3/11/2012 12:04:00 PM
    Well done haiku Heather, like it. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Ober Avatar Heather Ober
    Date: 5/5/2012 6:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Anne Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/9/2012 2:58:00 PM
    I love this - feel this way in the am sometimes!

    Ober Avatar Heather Ober
    Date: 5/5/2012 6:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hahaha me too! :)