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Aglow

Within pockets of morning coats a treasure trove is found
useful bit of verse like panned for pebbles of gold abound
For months it seems they've not seen the light of fluff unwound
but on this day, the laundry fey have blithely come to town.
The pockets turned all inside out the scraps of poetry hound
for clean white sheets of pristine paper where they can be put down.

One garbled thought fought in scrawl "Would you ask me to change for you?" 
"Like a inconstant moon that quarters, is that what I should do?" 
"Should I change for you like the seasons, let all my being go?"
"Give the fall of my life no meaning hide from the Winter's snow?"

I'll not change dear for I've fought and found all of me's aglow.






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  1. Date: 3/17/2012 9:12:00 AM

    Ahhh, Debbie what a joy to read this!! Every line is a jewel in itself, you really take these contests to another level. Great work as always from you. CONGRATSon your very well deserved win!!! Huggs

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 11:53:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Treasure Trove" contest Debbie. I am so honored to share a spot with you. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 8:04:00 PM

    wow, Debs. I am happy that I am finally seeing this one by going over the contest winners. This SO deserved to be high on the list. It was really unique!! Congrats.

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 5:33:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. What kind of image did you try to add here? There is just a white box with a red X inside.

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 3:24:00 PM

    Congratulations Debbie. This is lovely indeed. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 10:08:00 AM

    wow congrats on another master piece and top placement Debbie......~sashi

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 9:26:00 AM

    Congrats, Deb. Beautiful well written well deserved 1st Place. Enjoyed. Great job, nice going, my friend. Luv and hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 3:51:00 AM

    Send you a congrats for you win - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 2:57:00 AM

    Sweet Bet,congrads to you,an honor for me to be sharing same space ,huggs to you,lots of love to you Alizaabet!my inspirationa!

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 8:31:00 PM

    congrats Debbie on sweet first place win for a superb entry luv.. thankxx for suppoorting ..

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 11:37:00 AM

    Soupmail

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 7:40:00 AM

    Love this one, Deb. Our individuality is important. hugs, Catie :)