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Unseen Sovereign

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Unseen Sovereign

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tree born from a wee seed blew by the wind on the deserted prairie waits to be seen to reign
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  1. Date: 3/15/2012 4:06:00 PM
    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 8:28:00 PM
    love it! congrats on your winning :)

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 3:45:00 PM
    Congratulations!

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 3:12:00 PM
    congrats on your contest win; a great kimo that perfectly compliments the picture :-)

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 12:00:00 PM
    Congrats Ruben on your win.Loved it first time around.

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 5:39:00 AM
    Congratulations for your placement in this contest Ruben. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 10:30:00 PM
    nice flow about the seed, unseen, in a field, about to grow!

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 5:58:00 PM
    Just great combo Mr.Oh!!! and I loved the double entandre! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 9:28:00 PM
    Beautiful...your poem fits perfectly with the picture. gosh so many great kimos are written for this contest already... judging'em will be hard I guess. anyways I wish you best of luck...have a nice day Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 6:12:00 AM
    Very good Kimo here by you Ruben and a beautiful picture.Best wishes for the contest.

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 12:43:00 PM
    Ruben I love the wee seed line and your Kimo with a pic as well. I dig it loads, wishing you all the best for Rick's contest :)

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 9:38:00 AM
    nice entry for the contest. i tried writing one last night and it was horrible. anyway, great idea with the "wee seed" waiting to be seen. like the picture too.

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 9:23:00 AM
    Ruben, not only does your poem express the contest theme beautifully, but I feel a personification in the tree. People too are born from "wee seeds," waiting to reign when their time comes. Fabulous entry for the kimo contest and winning wishes are coming your way, old friend. It's so nice to have you back posting poems again! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 1:05:00 AM
    Ruben nice words to match the picture..David

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 12:13:00 AM
    vividly composed with a serene feel to it, ruben... good luck in the contest..:) huggs!