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More Than What You Thought

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Below is the poem entitled More Than What You Thought which was written by poet Richard McClellan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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More Than What You Thought

When you look at me, what do you see?
Defined in order, of life's motif.

I am more than what you think I be!

Do you see a man or the kid undertones in me?
Refined by life lessons, hardened granite I be.

More here breaking, like endless waves in the sea.

But when you gaze my way, what do you see?
A generosity of perfection, and chaos traveled in multiple directions?

There's more than what you think you see!

A rebel and soldier, driven for completion,
a seamstress and artist, is my reflection.

So I'm more then what you thought you seen!

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  1. Date: 3/6/2012 8:09:00 AM
    hey Rich, this I like a lot, if it's for the contest best of luck..David

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    Date: 3/6/2012 10:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for reading David, yes its for the contest... lol