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do da dishes yo

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do da dishes yo

inspired by some poem that's 100x better than this one l0l

water water everywhere
and all the dishes in the sink
standing in my underwear
unsure what to think

why am I doing this?
in the sink that is full of grime
why am I forced against my wishes?
surely this must be a crime

water water everywhere
why, water is flowing on the floor
the dishes are done, over there
but this is your problem, I'm out the door

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  1. Date: 4/14/2013 8:52:00 AM
    Dear Pang You are funny. I was just scanning poems from China and yours has put a big smile on my face. Thank you. Kathy

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 1:11:00 PM
    Pretty poem. I enjoyed reading it. May I give a constructive advise? Pls add more passion to your rich poetry though you expressed your forced passion to clean up the sink; but every successful poet/author/anybody must have stepped on the first step near the sink for survival until an honorable title is given as a vice or a general. All the best. Keep writing.