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  1. Date: 3/7/2012 9:23:00 AM
    Those unspoken words can kill you sometimes; a unique delivery and beautifully done. Thank you Nette

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 1:18:00 AM
    Awesome play of words Nette. So poetical..."she folds the moonlight in soiled papers" . It was sad that this Lady (in your poem) did not speak up her truth. I sure enjoyed this poem tonight. Good luck in the contest. Ang sarap ng summer diyan sa Pinas. Next year na ako siguro uuwi. Miss you too! Love Dalila

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 8:02:00 PM
    an astounding poem Nette luv.. u defined missing so well a feature in this write ..good luck luv..

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 4:05:00 PM
    Such a waste for this kind of thing to happen. And you just know it happens a lot with people. NICELY done, Nette, and the images evoke the frustration of "choking" on words. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 10:40:00 PM
    Nette... a wonderful entry... good luck in the contest..enjoyed your poem~ have a great night*ALWAY ;-) PD

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 7:38:00 PM
    Wow, Nette, such a sad write. I can feel the emotion. "She folds the moonlight in soiled papers", my favorite line. Amazing! Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 2:28:00 PM
    Loved this one Nette , best of luck in the contest , Hugs Declan xxx

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 1:46:00 PM
    Always listen to what your heart says.....powerful poem nette. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 12:58:00 PM
    Beautifully done Nette your poetry always comes alive for me, love hugs, vie

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 12:28:00 PM
    Nette a great entree for the contest, good luck..David

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 12:23:00 PM
    beautifully done, good luck in the contest.cory

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 11:30:00 AM
    I feel there`s a lot of fear in this write nette.As usual,you sew it together with some amazing lines my dear friend:-) "the coal in her throat licks the danger of a flame",and the ending line "a missing link of what chokes her breath.." Phenomenal,! Best wishes over at Susans`Hugggss,Arild

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 11:27:00 AM
    Another amazing poem from you Nette.some excellent lines here.Enjoyed very much.Soupmail returned.

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 11:22:00 AM
    wow! Nette, this one left my neck rather tight throughout. I could feel the strain. Excellent write. best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Catie :)