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Forsaken

One do not seek what brightness cannot reach
And one do not speak what words cannot preach
And not a class of his own has rights of one's speech
So shall rightness be gain to each of his own beseech.
 
To be of innocent reasoning, a soulful cannot deny
What words of heart and deeds of rights can comply
And so to one's joy of cry, to another a tearful decry
And to what it may seem, many have tried but gone awry.
 
So to say forth, a character shall never do
To sought of matters where it shan't be accrue
A forsaken wisdom we livings threw
And what to not hold is a challenge to not redo.

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  1. Date: 3/7/2012 9:11:00 AM

    Interesting write. Though I read all your poems the view count did not go up... Don't get discouraged by the low count... I believe a lot more have read your poems than the number indicates.

    Jabri Avatar Sarah Jabri Date: 3/7/2012 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much. I dont get discourage, I love writing and let others see it, so that I may get more advice to improve myself better. By the way, Thank you for telling me my mistakes. God bless your honest soul.
  1. Date: 3/4/2012 2:54:00 PM

    nice lines

    Jabri Avatar Sarah Jabri Date: 3/4/2012 2:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you :)