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Passion

How to contain the blossom of dreams, The beginning of life, or a fire's first spark. . How to maintain composure, and poise When morning's first light has smothered night's dark- How to express ones deepest emotion, Whether it's anger, or depression, or love, How to captivate the purest devotion Without the most perfect word to speak of. . When love has risen and absorbed all truth, From around you, and then deep inside, How to convey the passion within, With the tradional word 'love' to abide? Such words could never express this passion. . No matter how often they're spoken; Like how nothing could ever keep me away, No matter the times I've been broken.

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  1. Date: 3/10/2012 6:13:00 PM

    Congratulations on your awesome win! Jon

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 11:18:00 PM

    I'M LOVING THIS, KUDOS.

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 8:55:00 PM

    congrats Dana'lynn on a fantastic first place win luv .. with Passion.. awesome piece..

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 6:09:00 PM

    Ahh love in all its glory! Congrad's On Your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 11:54:00 AM

    congratulations on your big first place win with your lovely poem. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 11:35:00 AM

    Dana'lynn, I absolutely love this poem! What terrific rhyme and meter and wonderful word usage to convey your message and story. This was easy to read, easy to understand and contains a provocative message. Truly deserving of a first place finish in the Passion contest. Well done. Joe

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 11:32:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in my contest...just beautiful..love,Deb

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 11:28:00 AM

    Congratulations on your splendid win in Deb's contest. This poem is a beauty. Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 11:10:00 AM

    Good afternoon and congratulations on your win in Deb Wilson's "Passion" contest Dana'lynn. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/1/2012 11:03:00 AM

    the answer is "movement".

  1. Date: 3/1/2012 8:42:00 AM

    deeply intense write on Passion Dana'lynn.. wonderful use of vocab to express the many features of this elegant subject..luv.. thankxx so much for a great contest and my win .. I am an avid news junkie and watcdh all the debates to keep politically informed... hope u got some insight from this contest theme u provided luv..

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 10:16:00 PM

    nice........ ENJOYED YOUR POEM,, THANK YOU FOR SHARING~PD

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 7:35:00 PM

    No words can express the kind of passion you write of and yet you have come very close. A beautiful poem. Blessings, Rhonda