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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 11/2/2013 6:57:00 AM
    Nicely written and true but we also look to capture the mystery in her eyes. Her thoughts her emotions are there to see for she cannot hide. The skin and surface are pleasing yet we are more interested in what lies inside.

    Boy Avatar Nature Boy
    Date: 11/2/2013 8:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ok you have me there -lol I don't think the WalMart guys care that the color of your eyes change based on emotions you are feeling:)
    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/2/2013 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ...with aallll that I just went on about, your feedback is always appreciated Greg so thank you.
    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 11/2/2013 7:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Greg somehow I don't get all that from the guys looking at me at Wal-Mart but hey, I could have just missed it lol. Kidding, I know what you mean; but generally when a woman has caught a man's attention from a distance it wasn't her eyes he noticed ;) But the same hold true for many women, after all, the human body can truly be a work of art.
  1. Date: 9/27/2013 7:21:00 AM
    Lovely piece. Love the last line that sums it all.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 9/27/2013 7:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Karl; I feel that way as well.
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 7:41:00 AM
    beautifully written I love this poem

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 11:17:00 AM
    KInda spooky write hope all is well you haven't written in a bit? Light & Love

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 9/27/2013 7:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol hi Debbie; the last couple of years have been rough but this poem I had actually done many years ago. My husband and I had a very comfortable relationship and had no issues talking about the male and female figure. But the final statement is an important one for people to appreciate.
  1. Date: 3/22/2012 5:56:00 PM
    Very stirring words Ms Thomas. You have learned much about the male of the species and expressed it respectfully. If the last words are indicative of something amiss, it will be his loss. - Chuck

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 3/26/2012 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Chuck; I have been with my husband 20yrs now and like to have think I've learned a thing or two in that time.
  1. Date: 3/14/2012 11:09:00 AM
    Like this very much, such a truthful and sincere poem. harry

  1. Date: 3/10/2012 6:50:00 AM
    What a poem! I enjoy looking at beautiful women. The older I get the more pleasing they are. I am old but nit dead. And thanks for reading and commenting on my recent work.

  1. Date: 3/10/2012 6:48:00 AM
    What a poem! I enjoy looking at beautiful men. The older I get the more pleasing they are. I am old but nit dead. And thanks for reading and commenting on my recent work.

    Campi Avatar Jancarl Campi
    Date: 3/10/2012 6:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    i mean women not men.
  1. Date: 3/9/2012 2:12:00 PM
    F.J., nice one,,, Men what can they say..I always tell mine... your only huMAN'' yes, and we women look before the men.. so we are guilty as well... But, men look cause they can't control..we look..cause we like to compare... great poem..always..pd

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 12:41:00 PM
    Yep! The privilege goes hand in hand with trust..lol:) Have a grand weekend F.J,Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 3:36:00 AM
    That last line of yours really brought things to perspective, F.J. Very nicely penned!

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 2:41:00 PM
    Enjoyed the work especially the ending line..Trust is so important for a happy healthy relationship..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 7:00:00 AM
    This is good. We're not that bad.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 3/7/2012 7:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol...no you're not bad at all, most of you ;) I was much younger when I wrote this one. Though some things have changed, I still see them as art in motion. Thank you Marlon.