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The Nature of Man

Skin so smooth to look at so soft to the touch 
Movements slow and graceful as if dancing and such 
You cannot help but be seduced 
The female body captures and intrigues you 
Always wanting to look, this does not bother me 
You have always done so respectably 
This truth does not break my heart 
I too view the female form as a work of art 
While it does not stir the same feelings within 
I can appreciate a woman's hold over men




....once trust is lost, so too is this privilege

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  1. Date: 11/20/2012 11:17:00 AM

    KInda spooky write hope all is well you haven't written in a bit? Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/22/2012 5:56:00 PM

    Very stirring words Ms Thomas. You have learned much about the male of the species and expressed it respectfully. If the last words are indicative of something amiss, it will be his loss. - Chuck

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 3/26/2012 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Chuck; I have been with my husband 20yrs now and like to have think I've learned a thing or two in that time.
  1. Date: 3/14/2012 11:09:00 AM

    Like this very much, such a truthful and sincere poem. harry

  1. Date: 3/10/2012 6:50:00 AM

    What a poem! I enjoy looking at beautiful women. The older I get the more pleasing they are. I am old but nit dead. And thanks for reading and commenting on my recent work.

  1. Date: 3/10/2012 6:48:00 AM

    What a poem! I enjoy looking at beautiful men. The older I get the more pleasing they are. I am old but nit dead. And thanks for reading and commenting on my recent work.

    Campi Avatar Jancarl Campi Date: 3/10/2012 6:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i mean women not men.
  1. Date: 3/9/2012 2:12:00 PM

    F.J., nice one,,, Men what can they say..I always tell mine... your only huMAN'' yes, and we women look before the men.. so we are guilty as well... But, men look cause they can't control..we look..cause we like to compare... great poem..always..pd

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 12:41:00 PM

    Yep! The privilege goes hand in hand with trust..lol:) Have a grand weekend F.J,Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 3:36:00 AM

    That last line of yours really brought things to perspective, F.J. Very nicely penned!

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 2:41:00 PM

    Enjoyed the work especially the ending line..Trust is so important for a happy healthy relationship..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 7:00:00 AM

    This is good. We're not that bad.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 3/7/2012 7:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol...no you're not bad at all, most of you ;) I was much younger when I wrote this one. Though some things have changed, I still see them as art in motion. Thank you Marlon.