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Will You Be Mine

The night, was such a Treasure Trove night!
Their eyes were sparkling, in the light!

Even though, they were all alone,
they spoke in a soft, melodic tone.

A single red rose, to pledge his devotion.
She gives her, hearts-key, to reflect his emotion!

A soft blue-velvet box, he puts in her palm.
Although she's excited, she tries to stay calm!

She opens it slowly, a brilliant diamond's inside,
he caresses her warmly, and speaks , slowly with pride!

"If you'll be my wife, I will truely be blessed"!
She throws her arms round him, and whispers, Yes, darling, Yes!


Contest:  Treasure Trove
By:  Ralph Taylor







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  1. Date: 3/21/2012 4:50:00 PM

    Beautifully written....love it....congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 10:23:00 AM

    Ralph...Congratulations!!! Well done...Brava...I was temporarily captivated... ;)Big hugggss~Deb~

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 12:10:00 PM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Treasure Trove" contest Ralph. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 3:58:00 PM

    And they lived happily ever after? Congratulations on a truly sentimental and lovely poem and win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 4:06:00 AM

    Send you a congrats for your win. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 3:09:00 AM

    congrads to you Ralph!

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 8:57:00 PM

    congrats Ralph on a sweet win for this romantic entry so sensitive luv.. thankxx for supporting too..

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 11:19:00 PM

    this is WONDERFUL and I think Linda will think so too, Ralph.

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 1:11:00 PM

    Oh, I love this uplifting poem, Ralph, and it's great to see you posting again. Really like the way he gives her the engagement ring. Very eloquent and I wish you success in the "Treasure Trove" contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 8:26:00 AM

    Ralph very sweet poem....magical moment. in the last line there is one typo...he should be her.

    TAYLOR Avatar RALPH TAYLOR Date: 2/29/2012 8:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comment and help. Typo has been corrected. Hugs to you Doris, have a great day.