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This last autumn leaf

This last autumn leaf
Without resistance it falls.
Then drifting gently,
It lands it's golden form
upon her soft, smiling face.

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  1. Date: 3/2/2012 10:21:00 PM

    Congrats on your win with this lovely tanka. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 9:09:00 PM

    DANIEL... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 2:57:00 PM

    Congrats on your 1st place win, Daniel! Good job. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 1:03:00 AM

    Wonderful Tanka here.Congrats Daniel on your win.

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 10:52:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Short Verse" contest Daniel. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 10:09:00 AM

    I can picture this very easily. Nice tanka, Daniel. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 4:59:00 AM

    funny picture yet Ibet you had other ideas.....well written tanka! Hope you are enjoying your time at the soup and will jump right in and share your flavors with us!!

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 4:29:00 AM

    Lovely Tanka Daniel, thank you. - Anne-Lise