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one of us is drowning - Palindrome

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Below is the poem entitled one of us is drowning - Palindrome which was written by poet Maggie Huscroft. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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one of us is drowning - Palindrome

the more I love
the less I say. 
no speech 
out of reach
but I can see
on the sea,
like flotsam 
drifting away, 
one of us is 
drowning! 

drowning!
one of us is 
drifting away,
like flotsam 
on the sea,
but I can see
out of reach
no speech
the less I say 
the more I love.

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  1. Date: 5/26/2009 9:25:00 PM
    OK- I Googled it. I see that it is an established poetry form that I was fortunate enough to read here for my first time. Thank you. Smiling, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 5/26/2009 9:21:00 PM
    Maggie, I really like this mirror image style of poetry. Is says so much. It might be a new form. Is it? Lovingly, Dane