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Descent into Madness

The light was so bright everyone was attracted like moths to a flame
The flame began to dim Where is Everyone??
The Darkness is maddening!!
Can't Anyone hear me???
I Scream but no sound comes out....
I was Always There But where are you????
It's Ok Now I'm at peace I Understand...
You were Never There...

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  1. Date: 4/15/2012 2:43:00 PM

    Congratulations on our poetry being featured this week Cheryl. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 4:24:00 PM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Cheryl. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 11:35:00 AM

    I have a familiarity with this sentiment. Very compelling and thought provoking. - Chuck

    fabulae Avatar cheryl fabulae Date: 2/26/2012 11:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I appreciate the feedback but can't help but feel sorrow with the familiarity not humanity at it's best that led to this writer's production.