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  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:44:00 PM

    Belated congrats on your well deserved win! Thought this should be higher Ruben!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:36:00 PM

    Down this comment page I see I had said before that this deserved a HIGH place, and it sure got a well deserved win this time. Congrats on this beauty from your oldies!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 8:42:00 AM

    Yes I've read this one before...nice win for you Ruben...well deserved indeed!!! Congrats!!!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "TANKA ME" contest Ruben. It makes me happy to see you enter and win. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 8:25:00 PM

    congrats on a great win Ruben

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:07:00 PM

    RUBEN, congratulations with your "Tanka me this, Tanka me that, Tanka me any poem you want :-) LOL.... what a title.. Love it and enjoyed stopping by all my sisters tanka winners... good night... LUV~PD

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 4:04:00 PM

    congrats on your contest win; very effective tanka, perfectly capturing a moment in time...

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 3:00:00 PM

    My big congratulations on your super win my dear Ruben! love/hugs:)LG

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:11:00 PM

    R, Congrats on your win' luv * Siddy

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 9:01:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Ruben! I enjoyed reading this one before and enjoyed it again tonight. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 10:57:00 AM

    This was a favorite of mine in the contest, Ruben!! I love this and of how real it was. Super congrats!

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 8:11:00 AM

    Congrats, Ruben. Excellent piece. Great job. Nice going. Thanks for your kind words. Have a great weekend. Ralph

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 12:26:00 AM

    Ruben-san, omedeto, pasuga! For me, this is number 1! Ichiban! Ichiban!

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 12:05:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win, Ruben... :)

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 11:56:00 PM

    Ruben this one is really heavy...liked it a lot...congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 11:38:00 PM

    ruben, for me, this was number one!!! Congrats.

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 8:01:00 PM

    RUBEN... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 5:40:00 PM

    Nice and wonderful piece,Ruben.Congratulations on your win in David`s contest....

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 4:45:00 PM

    wonderful poem, Ruben, congrats, harry

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 4:25:00 PM

    Ruben, wonderful work. Well done. Congrats on making David's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 1:24:00 PM

    A beauty a photo frozen in time, congrats. Ruben on your special win. hugs vie

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 12:38:00 PM

    You are still, and always will be a poet with heart! :)

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 11:05:00 AM

    Much higher for me dear ;) Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 10:01:00 AM

    sweet congrats on your stunning win, ruben.. :) huggs!

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 9:35:00 AM

    major congrats Ruben on a wonderful win for this a,azing poetry I so luv..luv.. an exquisite visual write ..

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 7:10:00 AM

    Ruben Congratulations on your win! Loved it first time around.

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 6:54:00 AM

    I think this is my favorite Ruben! Congrats

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 5:52:00 AM

    Congratulations Ruben xx

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 5:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Ruben. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/1/2012 12:22:00 PM

    Ruben, If this doesn't win I'll be amazed. Imagery is perfect and difficult to do with the 20 restriction!