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The Folded Jet

You start with a paper so crisp and white,
You redo the first fold until it’s just right.
You continue to fold it whichever way,
If only the folds would decide to stay.
You crease it and crease it until at last,
The plane zooms past the Mazda, which travels fast.
But no sooner than it left your hand,
It found its way into the plastic trash can

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  1. Date: 4/5/2012 10:15:00 AM

    Brings back memories! A great write josh :)

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 11:07:00 AM

    Hi Josh love this reminds me when i was a kid making paper planes mine always crashed before it got to the bin though, thanks for the memory though

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 7:44:00 PM

    I love this one...I would have placed it much higher. BG

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 6:17:00 AM

    Congratulations Josh, like this one xx

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 7:16:00 PM

    JOSH... congratulations! WITH YOUR CONTEST WIN!! *Enjoyed stopping by to view may winners tonight!! Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 5:10:00 PM

    Josh, Congrats on making Susan's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 3:01:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win and thanks for supporting my contest! Creative take on the contest, using both words :)

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 11:06:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Paper Or Plastic" contest Josh. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 10:43:00 AM

    Nice on ejosh ued to love making planes and boats and things xx

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 9:52:00 AM

    Nicely done this poem Josh, thank you. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise