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About This Poem

dusk

burnt orange tapestry
   across the shadowed skyline...
      day flashes goodbye

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  1. Anish Avatar
    Matthew Anish
    Date: 2/25/2012 9:00:00 PM
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    Nice scene of a sunset. You handled the form well - which is not easy to do. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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    Gautami Phookan
    Date: 2/25/2012 1:16:00 PM
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    Beautiful images here of sundown..Congrats Deb on your fine win in haiku contest. love, gautami
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 2/25/2012 10:12:00 AM
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    Nice haiku, Deb. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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    kash poet
    Date: 2/24/2012 6:08:00 AM
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    Very good juxtaposition here by you Deb.Congratulations on your win.
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 2/24/2012 5:33:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in Charles' Haiku contest Deb. Love, Carol
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 2/23/2012 10:33:00 PM
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    a gem of a 'ku, deb... congrats on your win and huggs!:)
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/23/2012 8:53:00 PM
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    What a great metaphorical one, day flashing goodbye. Congrats in the contest.
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 2/23/2012 8:15:00 PM
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    Congrats on this orange skyline!! Gwendolen
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 2/23/2012 8:04:00 PM
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    Incredible! Amazing image...and the third line is majestic, Deb!! Congratulaions! Ruben.
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 2/23/2012 7:25:00 PM
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    Congrats. Deb on your win love,vie
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 2/23/2012 5:51:00 PM
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    a painterly image congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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    Charles Henderson
    Date: 2/23/2012 5:32:00 PM
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    I don't know why I have not noticed your name so much lately. A pleasant surprise to find your poem in my contest but no surprise at the talent in this entry.

    Wilson Avatar Deb Wilson Date: 2/24/2012 2:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Charles..been having computer troubles..that's why I haven't been around here as much
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    John Rhinem
    Date: 2/23/2012 8:27:00 AM
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    Smile ˜ And sooo does, Night. ˜ John!:) *
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    Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 2/23/2012 7:23:00 AM
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    Deb, I love this haiku. It's imagery is so incredible I can almost see it while reading it. Hugs with love, Gail
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    Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
    Date: 2/23/2012 6:15:00 AM
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    A beautiful image you have created. If this is for the contest, it is my favorite entry. Blessings, Rhonda


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