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About This Poem

Blink

Time
Sped by
Quick moving
Continuous
Eye gave blink it was past forevermore




Entry  for P.D's  Any Poem this week Contest.
Written by Carol Brown
2nd Place Winner

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  1. RAVICHANDRAN Avatar
    SAKTHEE RAVICHANDRAN
    Date: 6/23/2012 10:24:00 PM
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    EXCELLENT POEM I READ IN THIS MORNING SAKTHEEE S RAVICHANDRAN
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    Black Eyed Susan
    Date: 5/10/2012 6:36:00 AM
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    ooh how did I miss this gem? It's so profound! congrats on your win :)
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    JSLambert Chinaski domo-MR.ROBOTO
    Date: 2/27/2012 2:41:00 AM
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    Your Avatar PIC REALLY CAUGHT MY EYE CAROL! WOW! MY father is a photographer and when my son was young he took a pic that looks almost identical to that pic you have! Anyways the picture ended up winning a bunch of awards and some money and prizes! This is too funny! Btw, I dig the poem too!
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    FABIYAS M V
    Date: 2/25/2012 9:42:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your well deserved win,Carol
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    Gautami Phookan
    Date: 2/25/2012 12:29:00 PM
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    Whoosh time flies...loved how you ended with the last line.. Congrats on your superb win, Carol, nice weekend...huggs
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    bl devnath
    Date: 2/25/2012 9:31:00 AM
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    Wonderful expression of blink enjoyed, here few words are enough to say in depth. Congrats on your superb win. Loved and wish you all the best always, bl
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/23/2012 9:51:00 PM
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    loved it the first time, CArol. Big congrats in the contest.
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 2/23/2012 9:21:00 AM
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    congrats Carol on a super second place win for another exciting set of glorious words from your gifted pen luv..
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 2/23/2012 6:19:00 AM
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    Just a word of thank you to everyone. Thank you for the placement P.D.... What an honor to be included on the winner's list with such talented poets. Love, Carol
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    craig cornish
    Date: 2/23/2012 6:09:00 AM
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    Congratulations for a fine contest win and thank you for your comments. Sorry for generic response but I’ll be home this weekend. I like to read every poem I can for individual comments. Love you guys…..Craig

    Brown Avatar Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/23/2012 6:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nothing to be sorry for Craig. Thank you for your comment. Love, Carol
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 2/23/2012 4:01:00 AM
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    Great concept for a tetractys, Carol...powerful yet brief! ps...I've been wanting to tell u how cute that Avatar is...what a cutie patootie! Gwendolen
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    kash poet
    Date: 2/23/2012 2:32:00 AM
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    Carol,congrats on your win with this beautiful Tetractys.Enjoyed.
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    DON JOHNSON
    Date: 2/23/2012 1:50:00 AM
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    i second blink an time had passed, big bang surely was a blast... onetime...past

    JOHNSON Avatar DON JOHNSON Date: 2/23/2012 2:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    sometimes though we never think, it happens in a wink, and its gone time...instinct, between the rhymes....
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    Samual Ronthorpe
    Date: 2/22/2012 11:23:00 PM
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    Carol, we poets know you can say a lot with just a few words and you've proven it here. Well done and congrats on making PD's winners' list..............S.Ronthorpe
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/22/2012 10:25:00 PM
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    CAROL.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your poem of the week... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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    Robert Pettit
    Date: 2/22/2012 10:14:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win Carol.
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    Robert Pettit
    Date: 2/22/2012 2:49:00 PM
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    A few words, but collectively, they say a lot.
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    Erich Goller
    Date: 2/22/2012 12:26:00 PM
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    Time seems to move faster than a blink nice expressed poem.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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    Matthew Anish
    Date: 2/22/2012 10:58:00 AM
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    Tempus fugit! What you have written is so true. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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    Judy Ball
    Date: 2/22/2012 4:09:00 AM
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    Nicely said Carol. Reminds me of an old song. "TURN AROUND, TURN AROUND, TURN AROUND AND YOUR TWO, TURN AROUND AND YOUR FOUR, TURN AROUND AND YOUR A YOUNG GIRL GOING OUT OF THE DOOR." Great write. God Bless, JB
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 2/21/2012 7:02:00 PM
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    yep, life is in a blink of an eye, just like this, Carol!! Good one.
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 2/21/2012 4:27:00 PM
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    That's a great poem Carol! I love how you build up the entire write then in the last line, bam, it "...was past forevermore"! That is a fantastic line there at the end! I enjoyed your poem very much this evening my friend! Awesome Work!!
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 2/21/2012 2:34:00 PM
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    Got that right..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 2/21/2012 1:26:00 PM
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    So true Carol, hope your week will be a great one ;) love Wilma
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 2/21/2012 1:03:00 PM
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    yup...just in one blink..we can miss it all...thanks..pd
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    Dan Kearley
    Date: 2/21/2012 12:55:00 PM
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    Aaaahhh...(Eye)see the beauty in these words. :o)


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