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  1. Date: 5/23/2013 8:03:00 AM
    Lots to ponder here. I enjoyed the diamond metaphors but found some of the transitions confusing and disconnected. I may have to come back to this one to fully appreciate it.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/23/2013 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, take your time on this one. They all connect, but on a bit of a grander scale. Because it's referencing a few point of views surrounding the character speaking these lines. The passers-by. :) Thank you for coming by here, Richard!
  1. Date: 10/17/2012 9:13:00 AM
    Lovely write Drake! Love how you've used the rain and its rhythm to articulate the emotions going on. Nice!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 10/17/2012 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Vicky! Thank you so much! :) Sometimes it's all about the rain...
  1. Date: 3/5/2012 8:54:00 PM
    often times i think of the passers by while it rains.

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 2:30:00 AM
    Sweet - loving poem Drake - Drip, drop .. oxox Anne-Lise

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 3/5/2012 5:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    An adorable comment. Made me smile. :) Thank you so very much!
  1. Date: 2/27/2012 11:33:00 AM
    My heart dropped as reading this poem! It was great, and intense, and full passion at the same time. It makes you feel like in a tunnel, with a dark passage. Nice writing.(:

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/29/2012 9:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I know that feeling. :) It was great to put it into words. I really appreciate that, Cali.
  1. Date: 2/22/2012 4:51:00 AM
    loniliness slides its fingertips against my neck-Very profound line Drake..So great to read your poetry which always touches the heart's core-Charma

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/22/2012 7:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Charmaine. Cool name! That's very sweet of you to say. I thank you very much for that.
  1. Date: 2/21/2012 3:51:00 PM
    Interesting work..Some very creative lines..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the kind review of my work,..Sara

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/22/2012 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That is greatly appreciated, Sara. And you're very welcome too! =)
  1. Date: 2/21/2012 12:40:00 PM
    Thank you for sharing your poetry Drake. It was a pleasure to read. Love, Carol

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/22/2012 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And thank you for stopping by, Carol.
  1. Date: 2/21/2012 6:11:00 AM
    Hi Drake! so nice to see something from you. This one speaks of sorrow, yet there's nothing quite like walking in the rain. Hugs, Catie :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/22/2012 7:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey there, Catie! I love the rain...except when I'm driving in it. :) Thank you so very much.
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 10:05:00 PM
    powerful pen! thank you for your gregarious praise for Selene's moon

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/22/2012 7:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're quite welcome. And thank YOU for stopping by here as well. =)
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 8:47:00 PM
    Drake, wow... them are some strong raindrops.... I think that is why one is driven to accept rain, as a soul reminder... of the lonely times... a great poem..thank you.. always..pd

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/22/2012 7:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hola PD! Yes, I wholeheartedly agree with you. Thank you kindly! =)
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 6:49:00 PM
    Great poem! Love the intensity!-Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/20/2012 8:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Jenny! =) Thank you very kindly for that! And, no problem at all. It was a very worthy read.
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 6:15:00 PM
    You have a way with words...something that's mesmerizing. I should like to take some more time reading more of your works. Thanks for the uplifting comment on a poem of mine, Drake.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/20/2012 6:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I won't stop you, Glenn. :) Thank you so very much for stopping by here! And, yes, you're quite welcome!