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The Sisters

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The Sisters

So you've given yourself to the sisters, Nancy Needle and Silvia Spoon They are the worst sisters out there beyond compare as you will find out for yourself very soon Silvia always wants you to hold her, and Nancy always needs to be fed If you don't listen or do what they say right away, they make you feel as though you'll soon be dead So you take them wherever you go, no matter how far the trip may be Always giving in to their grips from within, wishing your soul to one day be set free What you need to do is show them your strength, and fight them with more then your mere mind Add in your heart that they took from the start with those together you will conquer them just fine It takes a long time to defeat them, at times you may feel you can't go on Eventually will come the day when you've kept them both at bay, and you realize a new life your living, and your back where you belong
Dan Kearley:2-20-12

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  1. Date: 12/13/2012 9:33:00 PM

    A very well written poem, that I enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 12:03:00 AM

    enjoy this much Dan..you are a great story telling<3:))) SK

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 12:03:00 PM

    Hi Dan Awesome loved this wrtie my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 10:53:00 PM

    great symbolism, DAn. I really enjoyed this one!

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 2:39:00 PM

    Dan - Like the symbolism, creative way you tell the story, and the positive ending. - Gail

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 10:17:00 AM

    enjoyed this, Dan a twist and a message all within this brilliant poem. harry

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 3:13:00 AM

    This is a warning i can attest to....listen...the only problem is when the sisters make your friends die in your bathtub because they were too strong or cut with something cheap and/or lethal.....just ask the spirit of three friends who shared those sisters....well done my friend...YOUR BROTHER FROM A DIFFERENT MOTHER ~PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 2:11:00 PM

    Hey Dan...awaiting your next poetry release... Have a great weekend. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 2:25:00 PM

    You are a wonderful storyteller Dan. I know I am a terrible commentor, its unforgivable really. I come on here with so limited time, half to an hour here and there, work 2 jobs, school, child, oh my list goes on and on, please know I appreciated each and every comment and word of support .I wrote a poem for a contest today on a napkin while on my coffee break, put it in my pocket and later blew my nose with it.

    R. Avatar G. R. Date: 2/24/2012 2:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    She must be a nurse! ha ha. Are u a nurse BB?..this sounds familiar. I do it all the time!
  1. Date: 2/23/2012 9:21:00 AM

    Where did you come up with women's names like that? Wierd and wonderful story to go with my coffee this morning. Glad to see your storytelling hasn't lost its magic!

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 4:09:00 PM

    Sweet take on the contest....you will reign supreme once again....enjoyed your poetic twist! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 7:48:00 AM

    I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your poetry Dan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 7:16:00 AM

    very differnt and unique, and I always say differnet can be good. but then again, everyone calls me crazy and looney because I don't believe in a "normal", though I will not be writing here anymore, will always look and see what you're up to in your writing, never give up that profound pen of yours, always a pleasure to read you, sincerely, Cindy

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 3:27:00 PM

    wow Dan great pen!

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 12:30:00 PM

    Thank you for sharing your poetry Dan. It was a pleasure to read. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 10:35:00 AM

    Awesome write.....great story and flow : )

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 5:51:00 AM

    If you haven't entered my transformation contest this is a good one for it! ;) Using personification for this write was a great choice. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 2:42:00 AM

    This poem you have put a lot of work in Dan.A completed poem,be proud of yourself my F.E.F. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 10:35:00 PM

    Very creative and clever. I enjoyed very much! Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 7:20:00 PM

    sounds like a vidio game to me.

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 6:49:00 PM

    I like this Dan it is original, well done my friend, love,vie

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 5:34:00 PM

    A fantastic read dan i really enjoyed this , all the best my friend , Declan ....