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. last call made — winter moonlight on an empty bottle .
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/22/2013 6:35:00 PM
You chose very well your personal favorite, Ruben. Congrats to you. How are you?
Carrie Richards
Date: 2/22/2013 9:25:00 AM
one of my favorite on this list of winners!! the mood is amazing!!! (I would place high!!)
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/22/2013 1:35:00 AM
Hi congratulations, great haiku Ex, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/21/2013 6:27:00 PM
congrats!
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/21/2013 6:12:00 PM
Ruben ,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 11/30/2012 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Your Best Haiku" contest Ruben. Love, Carol
Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/22/2012 4:47:00 PM
Ruben, I just realized that your name is on the third winner, so sorry for the late congrats, your haiku is really wonderful, I love the simplicity, once again, congrats Ruben! - Hug, Yanny :D
Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/21/2012 6:36:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Joseph May
Date: 11/20/2012 11:06:00 AM
congrats on your win Ruben
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/19/2012 9:46:00 PM
I see from below that I saw this several times. It's so cool to resurrect these oldies because we forget so quickly what we read here. Big congrats, Ruben.
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 11/19/2012 2:41:00 PM
Ruben:-) congratulations with your good enough haiku... xox~PD
Leonora Galinta
Date: 11/19/2012 9:58:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win, Ruben! love and hugs, Leonora
Tim Ryerson
Date: 11/19/2012 9:29:00 AM
Good haiku Ruben!...I can picture the scene...congrats on the win - Tim
Gail DeBole
Date: 11/19/2012 5:44:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your win!
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 11/19/2012 1:24:00 AM
WOW RUBEN YOUR DYNAMIC WORDS PACK A PUNCH LUV .. BEAUTIFUL WORK .. THOUGHT PROVOKING LINES TOO ..
Nathan A.
Date: 11/18/2012 9:36:00 PM
good haiku' Nate
Deborah Burch
Date: 3/28/2012 5:08:00 PM
!!!!!I love it!! I'm glad it won! Well Done, Ruben...how gifted you are...bighugggss,love~deb
Black Eyed Susan
Date: 3/1/2012 7:39:00 PM
congrats on your win! he is a tough judge!
Gautami Phookan
Date: 2/25/2012 1:03:00 PM
Congrats Ruben on your superb win with this fine piece of haiku... nice weekend!!
Kim Merryman
Date: 2/25/2012 10:00:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful 1st place win, Ruben! Love, Kim
olusegun Arowolo
Date: 2/24/2012 11:33:00 AM
Awesome write,Ruben.Congratulations to you and your teacher for doing a good job....well penned....
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 2/24/2012 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Charles' Haiku contest Ruben. Love, Carol
kash poet
Date: 2/24/2012 4:29:00 AM
Very good haiku here Ruben!Congratulations on your 1st place win.
kash poet
Date: 2/24/2012 4:30:00 AM
Oops...it doubled up....
kash poet
Date: 2/24/2012 4:24:00 AM
Very good haiku here Ruben!Congratulations on your 1st place win.
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/24/2012 3:50:00 AM
Congratulations Ruben,I instantly knew you where going to place high....Well deserved win on this haiku and on your other wins..bravo -and my deborah is my tutor too ...charma :)
yasmin khan
Date: 2/24/2012 2:46:00 AM
my tutor too ,congrads Ruben.
nette onclaud
Date: 2/23/2012 10:56:00 PM
well ruben, this has the full element of surprise.. congrats on your top win! : huggs!
Chris D. Aechtner
Date: 2/23/2012 10:06:00 PM
Ah, I see below that you had a nice visit with John.
Chris D. Aechtner
Date: 2/23/2012 10:03:00 PM
Ruben, this haiku is smashingly fantastic! I mean it. Very nice to see you take a 1st place victory, bud.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/23/2012 8:45:00 PM
I just knew it would score high. Congratulations, Rueben.
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