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An Early, Experimental Poem of Alternate Lines

The mirror reflects, obliquely,
a peculiar yellow butterfly -- it flutters, flutters
the specks of black my beard is made of
on the breeze.  A daffodil hangs down its treasure
and I spread shaving cream, in great white puffs,
shielding from the wind and rain its yellow
across my face.  The nose protrudes, ridiculous
excrescence.  A leaf half green sweeps up in circles
in the whiteness all around.  A weak chin, think I,
of windy sighs.  Squirrels crack acorns, crunching,
down into a patchy neck.  Very unsatisfactory
remembering winter's almost famine.  The trees --
appearance.  Altogether so.  Oh well.
Quiet.  Steady.  Sturdy.  Oh well.
The mirror reflects, but not uniquely.

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  1. Date: 3/7/2012 1:59:00 PM

    I hope you are well, Leo...I had to come back to add this poem to my favourites. I was thinking about it today and then I thought about Narcissus...and I thought it wonderful all over again!

  1. Date: 2/18/2012 10:25:00 AM

    Oh I love your experimental poem, Leo! This is quite a unique and refreshing reading experience.