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'Fallen Angels'

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'Fallen Angels'

I watch as they descend from the sky
So many of them I can't help wonder why

Once on the ground they dance all around
Still the sight of them to me is so profound

Some voices come in whispers so low
Yet some billow causing them to echo

There is a reason they came down below
They bring a message of things we should know

~Angels descending,bring from above,
Echoes of mercy,whispers of love~

These angels didn't fall at all
Just upon us they made a call


For : "Fallen Angels" contest of Tracie ~*~Indigo Dreamweaver
~Quote of Fanny J. Crosby included in this poem as requested~

Written in the form of Rhyming Couplet
Written: 02/17/2012
4th Place Winner

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  1. Date: 7/8/2012 7:06:00 AM

    I loved Fallen Angels! I could see them dancing around and felt assured that they are all around us! Wonderful poem. Thanks Carol, I look forward to reading more.

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 7:58:00 PM

    THUMBS UP!!!!

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 3:18:00 AM

    Your poems are perfect!

  1. Date: 3/1/2012 10:20:00 AM

    What a very touching write on angels, Carol! I really liked this one and I see congrats is in order, so congrats to you! :) btw, any luck on the old poems? I hope you were able to get even a few...hugs

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 8:08:00 PM

    Wow. Dats all I can say to this write. Please write some more like this one. Roman.

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 2:16:00 PM

    Carol, this is very beautiful. I like the fith stanza. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 11:04:00 AM

    I like your style, so smooth

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 1:48:00 AM

    great poetry here S C Brown, says poor ol johnson, happy now...

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 6:02:00 PM

    What a beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 1:39:00 AM

    this is a beautiful poem i really liked it, it put a smile on my face :)

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 3:03:00 PM

    very well done S C Brown... good to see you wear the crown...

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 5:58:00 AM

    Thank you to each and everyone of you for your kind words. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 12:18:00 PM

    A lovely story poem,I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 7:54:00 AM

    Nice!

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 6:37:00 AM

    Thanks for your message of welcome. I am sure that I will find some hidden jewels on this website, in reading other peoples poetry. I have just read your poem 'Fallen Angels' and I found beauty in simplicity. The sequence of rhyming couplets just flowed and I thought the concept that they came to share something special with us very touching. Poetry is a very emotive way of expression, and you have captured this. Kind regards, Michele

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 5:11:00 AM

    Great write and great win. What a musical image you have painted in this beautiful sketch. Great write Carol. I have joined an art gallery too “World Art Foundation". Here you can see some of my Photo Poems but I will continue to write on PS as well. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra...Carol B.

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 11:53:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Carol!!........Love....Anoucheka

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 6:50:00 PM

    Carol, it's nice seeing you here on the winners' list. Congratulations on your win. I just could not think how to approach this particular contest but you just took the ball and ran with it!!! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 6:03:00 PM

    Nice win here Carol! Keep up the good work. Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 3:01:00 PM

    congratulations!

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 2:38:00 PM

    Hope all is going well for you! Haven't heard from you in a while! Take care!!!

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 1:21:00 PM

    Congrats. Carol on your special winning poetry, love,vie

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 1:05:00 PM

    Carol, congratulations on your beautiful talented poem today in Tracie's Fallen Angel contest!! Light and Love, Gail

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 11:35:00 AM

    Congratulations Carol on your win.Loved it first time around.

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 11:18:00 AM

    Congrats, Carol! Your poem one of my faves. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 10:53:00 AM

    Carol, beautiful set of couplets. Well written and heartfelt. Congrats on winning 4th place in Tracie's contest.....................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 8:02:00 AM

    Very beautiful, Carol. Congrats on the win :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 7:01:00 AM

    congrats Carol on a glorious win for these lovely words on Angels theme for Tracie's contest Fallen Angels luv..

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 6:00:00 AM

    Congratulations a smashing write a deserving win xx

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 5:04:00 AM

    nicely crafted. congrats on the win~

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