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The words "I Love You" spring from your lips,

But, actions show that I'm barely a friend.

Your "Love" poisons in little sips,

The way you act is hard to defend.

Why do you even bother to pretend?



I have tried and tried and tried again.

I just don't know what you want me to do?

You are as stable as quick sand.

I gave my heart and soul to you.

It kills me to say, we are through.

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  1. Date: 2/22/2012 7:35:00 AM

    I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your poetry Christopher. Love, Carol

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 2/22/2012 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You, Carol.
  1. Date: 2/21/2012 7:59:00 PM

    done, finished Finito , over!! Good one, Christopher. the line I liked best: stable as quick sand!!!

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 2/21/2012 9:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yep! Hit the road Jack and don't you come back! LOL! Thank you.
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 8:32:00 AM

    Nicely penned, Christopher.

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 2/21/2012 6:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you!!
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 5:41:00 AM

    profound and straight to the point, like this Christopher. harry

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 2/20/2012 6:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 2/17/2012 2:19:00 PM

    Heartfelt piece. Many congrats, my friend : )

    Bunton Avatar Christopher Bunton Date: 2/17/2012 10:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You!