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stay my valentine

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stay my valentine

won't you be my valentine
put up with me
believe my lies
hold your nose
use blind eye's
listen to me snore
all night
let me control the remote
most of the time
help me buy my toys
when i whine
and don't ever leave me
keep me from crying
be my valentine
for all time

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  1. Date: 4/5/2012 12:47:00 PM

    This is cute John and had to laugh because that remote control is hard to get out of a man's hand. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 8:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win. Cowboy form? I'll have to look it up.... This was very interesting... Facinated me.

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 8:49:00 PM

    Soup mail

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 8:12:00 PM

    Share your sweet secret John, who is she? Such a heartwarming write for a lucky girl! And thanks for your dear comment - made my day! :) Luv, Lizzie

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III Date: 2/22/2012 8:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lizzy, there is no secret. i'm kinda single. but i was married once. and i wish my wife was as i discribed. but i do pay tribute to all those wives out there that submit to this poem everyday. and i say dispight what we smell like at the end of the day we do love you. with all of our heart. signed, husband
  1. Date: 2/20/2012 11:38:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super placement in ~P.D's~ "Any Valentine Poem Will Do" contest John III. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 3:51:00 AM

    Congrat. on your win,you definitely made me smile,thanks for that-Charma :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 1:24:00 PM

    I see congrats are in order, and I see andrea enjoyed it too :-) and guess who had a win with your valentine poem in the other valentine contest? AND we are both seven down on the list, clickety-click...

  1. Date: 2/18/2012 9:24:00 PM

    this is GREAT, john . so realistic!! Congrats on your win. Much enjoyed.

  1. Date: 2/18/2012 4:44:00 PM

    Ahhhhhhh!..Sara

  1. Date: 2/18/2012 4:28:00 PM

    Hey John, congrats on your second place win today in PD's Valentine Contest!!! Hooray!!! Light and love, Gail

  1. Date: 2/18/2012 4:16:00 PM

    good one mate....very well done

  1. Date: 2/18/2012 3:07:00 PM

    I love it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/18/2012 12:20:00 PM

    Congrats, John. Great job. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 2/18/2012 2:15:00 AM

    Congratulations John and yes please. this is lovely xx

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 9:43:00 PM

    John, congratulations... with your wonderful win in my contest. Thanks for sending out more love this pass valentines. Have yourself a nighty nite. I'm also Sorry for confusing, all my winners. ~Always*PD

  1. Date: 2/15/2012 1:23:00 PM

    LOL, witty and sweet piece, John

  1. Date: 2/14/2012 5:42:00 PM

    I would follow you around....I could be your lost toy.... :) just teasing, great pen lovely as always john!

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III Date: 2/14/2012 8:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lost toy; i could dwell on that for a while.
    Loving III Avatar John Loving III Date: 2/14/2012 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow, a fan.
  1. Date: 2/14/2012 5:16:00 PM

    "believe my lies" don't I already? "listen to me snore all night" I shall purchase earplugs (they'll come in useful for the whining too) oh! I KNEW this reminded me of something, that dr hook song "who's gonna water my plants? who's gonna patch my pants..." all together now "whoo-oo-oo if not you" haha

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III Date: 2/14/2012 7:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    babes, i would never lie to you.
  1. Date: 2/14/2012 7:40:00 AM

    An adorable piece, Happy Valentine John, love, vie