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Today the Darkness Comes

Today the darkness comes.
Music is subdued and low --
measured beats -- an ebb and flow
of oboes and of drums
to pace the sluggish feet.
I do not choose to meet,
this day of blacks and grays,
the collared priest who prays
but, ultimately, betrays
the cant that fills his days
with repetitious words.
I view the streaming hordes
descending from the church
steps, watch them as they lurch
about -- in apparent disregard
for any ordered exit from
the sepulchre, dank and dim.
They met to worship Him --
but I -- I try so hard
to suspend my disbelief --
to find, in faith, relief.
Yet, still, the darkness comes.

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  1. Date: 2/17/2012 1:07:00 PM

    Very expressive from beginning to end. I enjoyed this one lots! :) Keep writing! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 12:05:00 PM

    Leo,its interesting to know about your love for trees,If its not too much to ask,I would like to know what you have planted,fruits,plants,do you pets on your property,once I had rabbits and they ate all the colourful flowers,birds used to come eat strawberry at dawn,it was quite an experience,we had apples and pomogranates too,sorry I got carried away.

    Amadore Avatar Leo Larry Amadore Date: 2/18/2012 9:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    asmin: thanks for reading some my poems. I have always loved trees. Living in a hurricane-prone area, they sometimes pose a threat to my roof. I have a variety: ash, Chinese elm, cottonwood, australian pine, lime, pear, banana, papaya, mesquite, acacia, ebony, hackberry, and presidential palms which are tall and flexible. My pets are a large group of cats...they do not damage the plants, but like to climb in the trees.
  1. Date: 2/17/2012 9:17:00 AM

    Leo an impressive deep write luv and think we all haved moments felt like these lines so moving.. faith lifts us up ..out.. and over those doldrums.. and look at the great gift u possess to communicate such vibes in words luv..

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 7:46:00 PM

    Leo, this is an incredible piece...I've read it now a few times and at first I was totally overcome by the motions and emotion of the procession you so delicately describe, that I didn't know what to say. I too remembered such a day...Then on the second read, I noticed the rhyme you used, so subtle on the ear yet there in full glory on the page...I nearly overlooked it and how it suddenly brought new meanings and I was once again totally overwhelmed by your exceptional gift.

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 1:18:00 PM

    Yes sometimes such feelings come..can relate to it.Very nicely expressed feelings.

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 12:39:00 PM

    Hold onto your faith, the darkness will pass. hugs, catie :)