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Night Meets Day

Each gleaming light shines like a sun
Expanding awesomely in curling fires;
Each cloud forms a grotesque face
A face that knows not its bizarre desires.

We ascend in separate ways toward the sky
To merge the fantasies that form the trance;
We turn our eyes to engage the dream
And find the song that weaves the dance.

The violin throbs with threads of silver
The french horn wails with sobs of gold
And time found notes to knit the music
That was too tenuous to hold.

In the crowd were so many anxious faces
Ready to speak, to smile or frown;
They kept motionless in those quiet places
Where dark sorrows tied them down.

In what new time or space do we yearn
To pace the thousand steps that lead before us;
In what new light or darkness can we turn
Before time ends and darkness abhors us?

The lamp is out, the dream now forgotten
The music has stopped, the candle wastes away;
Through tangled hopes and dreams we passed
To find the place where night meets day.






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  1. Date: 7/23/2013 3:19:00 PM

    Very well presented thought and great discriptive narration Lizzie; thought you held ghis together well.. I sense at 1 stage it threatened to overwhelm you..? maybe i am wrong.? just my thoughts..' all in all great write as i would expect..!

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 5:29:00 AM

    !!!

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 1:09:00 PM

    Liz , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. Thank you for sharing your wonderfulness...pd

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 5:41:00 PM

    this to me was a trip to the theater. i hope you can see it like i can see it all the words fit. except for a few phrases. read the last five stanzas.

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 6:41:00 PM

    How you come up with the themes for your poems never ceases to amaze me! This is full of magical imagery and beautiful language. So cool! :))

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 11:49:00 PM

    Hello Elizabeth this is just so beautifully descriptive and harmonious... I really loved the orchestra introduction( The violin throbs with threads of silver....The french horn wails with sobs of gold)...gorgeous...thank you karen

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 1:39:00 PM

    Ouff..I got a chill at the end, Elizabeth! Loved the imagery, "each cloud forms a grotesque face", gives it an oblique setting.:) Ah, but the ending, certainly "where night meets day". You amaze me! Best wishes, Mikki

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 8:57:00 AM

    Just love it Elizabeth, and I am loving your book, luckily a lot of books that we might not get in our Canadian bookstores , we can get on kobo for our e-readers ( and usually at less cost) I have a new favourite poet and am looking forward to many more books by you

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 9:38:00 PM

    You're my new FAV Poetess! Enjoy the honor! LOL! Ruben

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 9:37:00 PM

    "In what new time or space do we yearn/To pace the thousand steps that lead before us;"!!..."Through tangled hopes and dreams they passed/To find the place where night meets day."!! Exceptional! Im glad i found your poetry, Elizabeth!

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 1:10:00 AM

    Hi Elizabeth, for me you gave a unique spin to when "night meets day"-- I had a different mindset as I saw your title-- so this was a refreshing read for me :)

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 1:21:00 AM

    Really powerfull write that i'd think anyone can relate to Lizzie; soo.. enjoyed reading today..)

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 8:28:00 PM

    What a beautiful verse here. "the music has stopped,the candle wastes away"...I love that part. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 6:24:00 PM

    LIZ>>NICE~have a nice one ;-)* PD

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 5:32:00 AM

    Sounds like the end.... "Night IS darkest just before dawn"

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 8:55:00 PM

    You have deep insight into the spiritual- I really enjoyed reading your verse, blessings, Bren: ) and thank you for your comments to mine, : ) I read somewhere you paint as well- do you have a web site of your work? I paint too. love, bren

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 1:32:00 PM

    This is awesome. You are so talented. If I could I make you a fav poet twice! Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 9:12:00 AM

    To find the place where night meets day, will I be agape or words I'll say. Reading your poem I desire to be, where night meets day in front of me. The images your words picture are simply wonderful Elizabeth :)

  1. Date: 2/18/2012 1:13:00 AM

    These words convey & sing much more than what one sees in this beautiful write my friend. Beauty of words and waves of your thoughts and emotions rising high and high can be seen everywhere in this sweet write. Great write Eliz and thank you for your kind and always precious comments. I have placed a new Poem today. It’s an Elegy & hope you would read this soon. Besides, I have recently joined World Art Foundation & my Photo Poems & Videos can be easily seen here. Love & best wishes.RavindraKK1

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 11:48:00 PM

    Wonderfully expressed about depression with the hope of light, loved and enjoyed, hugs bl

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 10:37:00 AM

    such creativeness, Elizabeth, almost can feel the sentiment here, love this. harry

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 7:45:00 AM

    Wonderful write. I agree with Kevin, I love your poetry. Keep it up. Have a great weekend..TAH

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 5:02:00 AM

    Beautifully said and quite exquisite. I love your poetry.

  1. Date: 2/15/2012 2:33:00 AM

    Dear Elizabeth, This poem is just exquisite! Each nuance takes the mind on a separate journey. You are truly a poet's poet. Please share this with PFT too. Sorry I haven't been able to comment much. Mahalo for yours.

  1. Date: 2/14/2012 3:57:00 PM

    A vast horizon slips inside a void of time with no human pride. The silent sounds of distant light. Expanding far the daily flight. Of constant eagles strive for quarry. As angels know there's no need to worry. Time marches in it's own parade. As we just go on in our own charade. bty Elizabeth, I will be coming back to this poem again. Such amazing swirlings. :)

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 10:57:00 PM

    Beautifully said and very well expressed. Loved it. Been gone awhile because my puter crashed and had to go to the puter hospital. I think it's feeling much better now. (smile) God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 5:11:00 PM

    Beautiful poetry, masterful use of language to convey an eternal truth. That we all our striving to find that place where our hopes and dreams assuage our fears and transcend the darkness and the light and mingle joyfully in sorrows and happiness. The dream is not all forgotten as it were, but it will die if we stay motionless in those quiet places. Great stuff as always Mrs. Elizabeth

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 10:41:00 AM

    Very dramatic, Liz - impressionistic, vague but powerful. For me the poem is too complex to form a solid idea. I will read this a few more times. Understand, I'm rather thick at times. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 5:11:00 AM

    very very very well done . i liked the rhyming and the timing. but the images they match the scenes so perfectly. you did your homework. T.S.

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 5:21:00 PM

    a pleasure to ride the poetic journey with you, lizzie... enjoyed the soft, caressing feel of this piece!..:) huggs!

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