Fourteen Blossoms

The Star Magnolia's fourteen blossoms
Stark against winter's dead flowers
Skeletal stand pear, fig, rose
Oh! Rose 'pon trellis dead_
Or so it seems, now
Deep within earth
Roots draw strength
Revive
Live

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Daniel Larson Date: 2/21/2012 7:19:00 PM draws the picture . . .nice write. thanks too for your wonderful comment on Going Through Pompeii. much appreciated, regards, daniel
jack horne Date: 2/13/2012 1:51:00 PM Wish I had that magnolia.Yes, the trees look dead in my garden too - lovely piece, Sara
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 2/12/2012 10:22:00 AM a vibrant view of this wonderful blossom Sara.. excellent description in poignant lines of expression luv.. u have a gift for this Nature venue luv..
Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/11/2012 8:21:00 PM I really like the title for this one, Sara. THose fourteen bossoms in the dead of winter. VEry cool.
James Marshall Goff Date: 2/11/2012 5:11:00 PM Sara....I see a metaphor for life? nice! jimbo
Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 2/11/2012 4:22:00 PM Beautiful, Sara. I love magnolias...I enjoyed reading.
kash poet Date: 2/11/2012 12:57:00 PM Just excellent Sara..Beautiful Nonnet...Enjoyed the read.....
Russell Sivey Date: 2/11/2012 12:22:00 PM Wow Sara, you really came up with a great one here! I thoroughly enjoyed this write so much I shared it with some of my family! And they liked it as much as I did! The poetic nature of this poem was so good we all were able to read into the depths of the write! Awesome Work!!
Catie Lindsey Date: 2/11/2012 11:29:00 AM wonderful imagery in your nonet. Enjoyed! Hugs, Catie :)
Carrie Richards Date: 2/11/2012 9:43:00 AM Oh, my how lovely this is....as lovely as the blossom of which you write! :)
Mystic Rose Date: 2/11/2012 8:49:00 AM You must be an avid gardener my sweet Sara, the way you write about flowers like no other, love to you, vie
Gail Angel Doyle Date: 2/11/2012 7:54:00 AM Sara, you're on a roll!! This is beautiful. Hugs, Gail PS : Best wishes in Linda's contest!!!
raskin bobbins Date: 2/11/2012 7:33:00 AM Live to bloom again, deep meaning with this. Inspirational nonet, Sara.

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Fourteen Blossoms

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