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Mornings

Mornings...

Dawn still blooms for me, 
eglantine petals unfurl, 
loosened from nights bindings.
Tufted in mornings aurora
I am softened in this light.

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  1. Date: 9/4/2012 4:26:00 AM

    Such a beautiful description!

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 9:52:00 AM

    a brilliant beauty raskin and how good to see u again luv.. excellent vocabulary to express the way mornings are crucial to life.. so enjoyed perfection luv..

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 7:09:00 AM

    Very descriptive and expressive work.I could almost see the scene.. Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

    bobbins Avatar raskin bobbins Date: 2/11/2012 7:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sara for your comment, a bit of spring today.
  1. Date: 2/11/2012 7:06:00 AM

    where you disappeared to Raskin,good to read you,beautiful vers libre.

    bobbins Avatar raskin bobbins Date: 2/11/2012 7:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Buncha "crap" happened. I'm better now. Imagination is shifting into gear! Thanks for your comment Yasmin.
  1. Date: 2/11/2012 7:01:00 AM

    You have a special way of linking words together to make a tapestry of beauty Raskin, rather unique name I never heard before, I enjoyed your work this cold wintery morning, made be think of the beauty of forthcoming spring, blessings and love your way, vie

    bobbins Avatar raskin bobbins Date: 2/11/2012 7:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The words are like painting to me. Thanks for commenting Vie. I appreciate the feedback.