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I can see now

I can see now, the bubble we lived, was so fake. I can see now, giving my heart was my mistake. Now I can see through all your lies, wool no longer covers my eyes, I can see now. (Bubble) M.Mahauariki © 2012

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  1. Date: 2/11/2012 6:21:00 AM

    the rhyme and rhythm caught my attention at the first line, which doesn't happen often. love it! :)

    Mahauariki Avatar Murray Mahauariki Date: 2/11/2012 7:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you - Muzz
  1. Date: 2/10/2012 9:25:00 PM

    thanks for this one, muzz... nice one!...:) hugggs!